Author, are you serious right now bro? This has to be a joke, right!?
Great vocab , gripping scenes , intense dailogs , great storyline , intriguing background, feels like you're there yourself in the battlefield. Impressive nd would recommend to everyone.
Nice novel i love it ? worth reading keep it up
hey buddy i liked your approach in the writing style of this novel.dont ever change it. update fast man i am waiting for new chapters. dont make the novel very fast pace.take time to make the mc powerful
First 40ish chapters are a little slow because of the foundation being set up for the book, but after that it was amazing and I couldn’t stop reading until I caught up to the current chapter. Highly recommend giving this book a shot if you’re interested ???
Very nice......................
First let me start of by saying the reasons I like this novel.The main selling point is the unusual ability of MC to control insects and his merciles persona. Besides that, I personally think the interaction with the spider girl, Victoria is very cute.I always appreciate a good romance inside a novel—not too dramatic, nor too light—along with strong action sequences. If these two factors remain consistent throughout the novel, I might give it a full read until it's finished.I don't think a brilliant writing quality is necessary to attract someone like me, as long as it's not unbearable grammer or too AI generated, its fine.I don't know in which direction the story is shaping—this early in the novel, so I can't really comment about that. Though, I can feel you are trying to build something solid with the flow it's going.Honestly, and I mean I'll be very frank; I'm in it for the spider girl and well made characters, each having a distinct personality. As for the aspects you can improve on:when shifting from a emotion invoking scene to a different one—completely unrelated to it, try not to include too much details or added information in the following scene. I'm saying this because people, when already stirred with emotions beforehand, tend to skim past the long paragraphs filled with information, because they are forced to surrender the emotional content they felt earlier.Now onto the world building. I feel like you can improve on it; you know... adding a bit more depth and information about the world, or perhaps highlighting the surrounding atmosphere and vibes.Consistent upload schedule is always a given. There is no compromise in this, if you want to have a successful novel in this app, especially at the start.And yea, that's about it.. nothing more I can critique on. Keep up the good workP.S: all of these are simply my personal opinions, and I never claim to be an expert.also P.S: I'm a HUGE sucker for good fluffy romance, and action scene.
FateDevilAce how does this MC compare to Keith who's better ?
Wow, I really love this novel, I can't seem to put it down, the pacing is perfect, and the fight scenes, omg Captivate me, I highly recommend this book.
J'ai récemment commencé à lire L'Ombre de l'Inconnu, et je dois dire que je suis totalement captivée par l'histoire ! L'intrigue est à la fois mystérieuse et émotive, avec des rebondissements qui m'ont tenu en haleine. Émilie, en tant que restauratrice d'art solitaire, me semble tellement relatable, et sa rencontre avec Adrien est pleine de tension et de secrets.J'apprécie particulièrement la façon dont l'auteur crée une atmosphère immersive, rendant chaque chapitre encore plus intrigant. Les descriptions sont si détaillées qu'on peut presque sentir l'art et les émotions des personnages.Je suis impatiente de découvrir comment l'histoire va évoluer, surtout avec tous les mystères qui entourent Adrien. J'encourage tout le monde à lire ce roman, car il promet d'être une aventure passionnante !franchement ce livre est à recommander !! votez !
You have an amazing idea just need fix something’s and you can have an amazing novel
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