I'm loving it so far despite only having 2 chapters, my only recommendation for better reading is that you should make the description of Kara or the other characters more informative, so readers can imagine them more clearly.
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This was a really great read. The plot was amazing and all of the characters had such wonderful personalitys. Thank you author for the great novel.
It's pretty bad.
Character isn't consistent. Writing quality is poor.
The idea was decent but the execution is pretty bad.
He magically has a search box, and his first thought is revenge. His second thought? Also revenge, on someone who slapped him. His third thought? To learn to fight real well.
Rumor has it in several chapters later he finally finds an excuse as to why he can't save his girlfriend.
It has no good points. Maybe there's two paragraphs of creativity in the first accident. But a lot of it is just not explained, or makes no sense. The author has virtually no understanding of how anything works, either. Not sure how it's possible to lack that much common sense.
this is not a translation, this is a fanfic of the original works where the characters and setting is changed to be more in ideal of the translator.
this is very unprofessional.
don't call this a translation, just call this a fanfic of the original work.
the ratings is not based on the original works.
if you are looking for the original, just search 我能看到欲望清单.
Ah this is a good old novel if it's not a classic. One of first few CN translated novel i read and can still remember the story line. Not finished reading it though, I think it's on 500 ish chapter and because the translation was pretty slow at that time and i then also read other and slowly forgot to check this again.
The story is pretty good and rarely went boring as you expected from TJSS works. And usually his novel doesn't go way overboard like thousands of chapters and that's a good thing for me.
Maybe I'll restart reading this one later.
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Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author
Keep it up believe me youre doing good because i pretty much have destroy many of those noob writers so believe me that you are good dont give up just wait for youre golden oppurtunity i believe you will be ranked if wasnt for those stupid readers that doesnt know that the reason for the weekly reset is for giving a chance to the new books so they will not be push backwars and be forgetten because the other books have alrady have a foothold for fame
This novel is definitely a page turner! The way the author paints a picture in our minds is absolutely amazing. I was able to imagine everything perfectly. This story is written perfectly and is definitely a must read!
I enjoyed each chapter, it is easy to digest and also the sequence between one chapter and the next does not leave you feeling lost. In addition, the plot is captivating, it motivates you to continue reading and wanting to discover what awaits you in the next chapter.
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