I don't like writing long reviews, so all I will say is I enjoyed what I've read up to the premium chapters.
Good...,,,...............................
5 stars for encouragement. Not my cup of tea, since the starting phase makes it seem as if we're missing the begining, mid, late and even endgame phases of the story, with the chars already developed. Wives, already taken. Concubines? too many to count. Only developments left are for new chars, while we can expect wives to keep popping up with their development already done. This gives the vibes of, i'm retired from everything, so let's pass time out of boredom and maybe find some more wives, so it doesn't give off the feeling that there's anything left to be done, even more, it feels like the story development will focus on the disciples, who seem to fall at first sight.
I really like this Story. Please keep us Updated
I find the writing terribly messy, I had to stop and dropped it.
I’m only 20 ch in so far. Early reviewBiggest issue with the story is it feels like a first work. Writing quality is pretty average. The way females talk to the mc is super annoying. Author also likes to put the stats page in multiple times in a chapter.Mc is pretty naive/ not super intelligent. So far. World background has been lightly explained typical dungeon/dungeon break type situation. I personally like devour / stealing ability type stories. So this has a win.Seems like it is a decent read especially if in between other stories.
Radueriel: first of all, you are not dead.
so far its's good and easily understandable.
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a good novel.. the sense of humor is great.. thanks author, it's been a long time since I was able to laugh hysterically just from reading a novel
Lots cringe moments ruins the novel for meThe protagonist spends most of the chapters pretending to be cool but comes of like an edgelord His companion praises him for doing ordinary and unremarkable things (I cringed every time)However the writing is decent except for poor sentence structure (too much rambling and repetition)Worldbuilding is shallow... what with the info dumps in a constant attempt to compensatePlot is there and it is consistent for the most part but relies on the idiot ball tactic at timesWorst is the tone of the novel... almost all characters showcase snark and tantrums, dialogues sound immature and the tension is all but none existent... so it is no word i feel cringe almost every chapterOverall well written but misguided... If only there wasn't such a blatant attempt at making everything look cool because often the result is the opposite
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