Good story Personally the story seems immature but itbis this immaturity which gives it its ‘uniqueness’Please dont decrease the wuality and please do not drop itI like the fact that the character development is based in arrogance cos it seems he has still not learnt from his brother’s advice(i kinda like the attitude he shows sometimes though)Wonderful story
gotta be honest Ronan Phoenix had a good ring to it, Ronan Draco just doesn't provide that same ring, still like the opening though. need more words for review
So yes, of course, I am going to give my book a 5 stars. That is like a rule. ...Okay, so let me be clear. This book is not an sm*t book like my other book, it has a more serious plot. So of course, since I want character development as well, my mc will not be a perfect one. Remember, we have read tons of novels, he has not. So don't expect him to be very smart. However, he will have people supporting him from behind who will ensure that he doesn't make bad decisions, but you will have to wait for them to appear.... Warning: this is a revenge novel, so there will be lots of killing. Mc will even kill innocents without a shred of mercy. There will be gore.So read if you are comfortable with that stuff. Thank you~~...Now with that done, I welcome you for the ride~~
Full support for you author ^^bThere is no smooth road in this life, everyone starts from the bottom so just keep your spirit up and keep learning to build up your foundation. Hahahaha and for a reminder, there is a lot of silent readers who support and loves your novel ^^b
I did not read this book but the synopsis says it all. You want to avoid talking in the past tense when writing a novel. Also avoid switching between them in the same sentence
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I like so would you READ OT then you will see how good it is................................................................................
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Very great story so far. I think it would be better if you can somehow make the story line a little bit faster cutting very little discription parts and at a little faster timeline.
This is a good system book.It has an interesting concept, I'm tempted to ruin it for everyone but I will control myself so you lot can enjoy it as well.
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