By far one of my favorites. I adore the character development and plot. Authors style of writing is also gorgeous and I love the details and love how well the author expresses the emotions of the characters! Truly can't wait for more ^^
Its not my type of novel, more likely it was my first time reading this kind of genre but I was already hooked with how the character was portrayed, I found myself laughing at some funny parts. The novel is well written too, so I had a smooth read and enjoyed it.
This is a good attempt at this genre.
Your writing style is different and pleasant to read.
You've worked hard on world background and description. I was able to imagine the scenes.
The starting chapter contained too much information and so many characters in one go...its hard to remember all the characters around king...but i guess we'll get to know them later on.
Juin's character is a bit mysterious for me because there will definitely be a reason form him to be chosen one.
I look forward to more chapters..
Keep up the good work..Good luck
Those looking for some fantasy and adventure, then this is for you! The author does a good job in building the world and characters. I'd love to follow their journey more! Keep it up!
Okay..not gonna lie..this novel deserve better and more attention than trash piece of garbage novels where the mc is just a fking rubbish rotten piece of mushroom. I like you author.. To make the mc strong is what makes the novel good..i like seeing a different type of wuxua novel where the arrogant young master is the mc and not the oooother way around..i like how mc trample all trash mortals with hhis finger.. I lilike how mc have a lot of strong loyal general where he can order them to do his task.. i fuking like mc with family that dotted on him and hhis family are fking strong.. what i dont fking like about other novels is that tthey keep making tthe same cliche starts where mc is super fuking dog feces weak piece of rodent weiner bone that get powers randomly but fking weak regardless..keep getting bullied and only to be saved by plot armors.. Also even thou there are soome novels where mc is fking strong.. I HATE THE FACT THAT THEY ARE TOO FKING LOWKEY WHICH LITERALLY MADE THE MC OF THESE NOVELS KEEP HAVING SCENE WHERE PEOPLE THROW TRASH AT HIM, THIS MAKE ME FEEL LIKE KILLING THE FKING AUTHOR.. i hope that the authors who create these novels get brain cancer and die under my piss.
The plot is a bit unique as most cultivation novels with a heaven defying protagonist don't have transmigration in it as well. But I haven't seen much reference to the transmigration aspect in the initial chapters, as in character doesn't behave like a 21 century person, he's very used to the new world.There are several noticible grammatical errors. I'm not sure if that is due to lack of skill or just due to rushed writing, because the author updates very often. The general writing is a bit off in some parts, not sure if it is intentional
Amazing this novel is unique and unlike all the other cliche novels eith mcs that follow the same generic sequence. Mc is likeable. All the side characters actually have meaning to the story and is not just cannon fodder that will die in just a few chapters
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I think this is a very good book the writing quality starts off fairly bad but definitely gets better later on. the characters are interesting and the plot is developing well. One thing I have to say is so far when characters are having discussions for plans they don't seem as well thought out as they should. dialogue also seems a little stiff in some places but for as how to fix that and if it improves later on in the book, I am not sure. I have only read up to chapter 58 this far.
I was looking at what other books my favorite authors had done when I found this. It’s a good book so far, it just needs to be updated again after the author regains interest in it, which I hope happens soon. I really wast the details on suspicious hacker dude, cat girl sex, and that one bike dude amongst other things...
Here is a review by the master => After reading this i think you need to improve your grammer and also vocabulary. There is still room for improvement as i see that you are new to this so you can improve a lot. Good luck. ?