The author/translator is a tool. Contsantly adding junk to the chapters for word count. Dropped the story midway and started a second story. I barely made it past chapter 60 before getting fed up. Thankfully I wasted nothing but time due to the free 24 hour bonus.
Do not waste your time with this person or thier works.
This story is absolutely fantastic, the writing quality for the most part makes me question if this is a published story already as it’s phenomenal. The character development progresses nicely leaving me wanting more. The world is decently developed and the detail throughout is fantastic. I’m only 55 chapters in, but so far it’s a great read. Thank you author!
idk about this book. it gives me mixed signals. it seems realistic about cliches on one hand and on the other I want to argue against everything it stands for. it's a conundrum. however it is an original take on cliches so it's worth a shot to open your views on other books.
Its good and it starts out feeling like it will have good pacing too but it becomes really slow paced story after about 30-40 chapters.
One of the best basketball novels I have ever read, the most realistic one
I’m a (real) football fan but I like a lot basket too but I don’t understand much of the game,but the author is really well versed in the game
The story is really fast paced with some writing mistakes, after all the author main language is not English but French, it is dificult to understand some time what is happening in some details in the game, but it is still one of my favorites
If you have time give it a try
Well this look interesting, i Will waiting for more chapter
Writing Quality: Your writings understandable and readable with punctuation and grammar (better than 80%-90% of novels) and there's little to no spelling errors I've seen for now.
Stability: Can't rate it well because there are only 3 chapters but it's looking good so imma give it the benefit of the doubt
Development: You've shown what the MC is capable of early on and shown what his eyes and wishes can do and the benefits they grant in 2 chapters which many fail to do with 10.
Characters: Your keeping to the strength based world like the soul refinement guy looking down upon those weaker then him and his enemies giving up cause it's hopeless
World background: Story is holding up and looks like your adding kingdom aspects into this (which is my sweet tooth) along with the steady development of the world instead of jumping 20 chapters every 3 lines
First, world-building is beautiful. The opening history was enticing and makes you want to read more. Th fact that different races are involved makes it a high-class fantasy. Can't wait to see their interaction. If u are a lover of anime and fantasy, this book is for you.
I enjoyed reading this alot, I would like to continue on with this novel if thats alright, cuz its too gud to be left behind (even tho im not that skilled i dont want to see this work left behind) so im willing to try and continue this novel or if u decide to pick it up ill be happy pogs!
I would have loved the story if the ML's personality was the same as the FL. Why does he act like pu**y when she does things.He calls her master that .......fk.Huh anyways it's not my cup of tea .
Good Job! The beginning is good. Try to continue the story and make more updates. The concept is interesting. Keep up the good work. Good luck!
i like this novel very much especially in the recent arcs. its always exciting and making me wanting more. the author also improved a lot, especially the writing. love this novel. dont drop.