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Yeah that’s kinda the point…he doesn’t want to play a mage but the account given to him was a mage account so he’s choosing not to play as a mage did you miss the entire point somehow and would you miss the broad side of a barn if that was an option as well
The translation quality is satisfactory, but let's delve into the review. If you prefer an innocent main character (MC), this might be a suitable choice for you. However, I found the MC rather frustrating at times, despite not being a literal child – he possesses intelligence, yet seems to overlook using it.
Additionally, their lack of communication throughout the story is highly annoying! It's understandable that the male lead's background contributes to his emotional limitations, but what about the MC? He has fond memories and a loving upbringing – it doesn't quite add up.
Furthermore, the male lead's pushiness is exasperating, even considering his pregnancy-related behavior. He consistently fails to listen to the MC, especially when events deviate from the book. His stubbornness prevents him from adapting to reality, and despite wanting distance, he keeps drawing closer.
The MC's age feels implausible, as if he were a child instead of an adult with two lifetimes of experience. Lastly, another pet peeve is how everyone accepts the MC's sudden use of unusual words, ideas, and phrases without question – it stretches the suspension of disbelief for me.
Overall, while the translation is decent, the inconsistencies in character development and unrealistic aspects make it difficult for me to fully enjoy the story.
I appreciate the storytelling pace and find the content engaging enough to read. However, the fact that it's not free is understandable given the effort required for translation. Unfortunately, I'm encountering some confusion with the translation. Despite being in the 50s chapter, I am still unclear about the FL's father's actual name. There are also inconsistencies in naming and pronoun usage for other characters. A machine translation might provide a similar experience.
The story itself is enjoyable, and I particularly admire the FL's practical approach. She focuses on financial success rather than seeking revenge, which sets her apart from the typical重生 female leads who tend to be overly sentimental even at a middle-aged mental age. I would love to see a more accurate translation to fully appreciate the story.
The concept is intriguing, and I enjoy stories with intense characters. However, the execution could use some improvement. It's not terrible, but there are inconsistencies that disrupt the flow. The pacing and plot development feel rushed at times, which affects the storytelling. The main character's journey is compelling, as he tries to distance himself from a villainous past. Saving people with a possessive sibling dynamic complicates matters, as they become执着 in keeping him involved. Alongside other challenges, the MC finds it difficult to break free. It's a sigh-worthy situation for him.
I'm hopeful that the writing will refine over time, but only time will tell. I genuinely appreciate the narrative it aims to convey, so I'd encourage you to give it a chance. After all, everyone's preferences differ, so it might resonate more with you than it does with me.
Ultimately, an adequate translator took on this novel.
In terms of storytelling, it scores 9 out of 10. I appreciate narratives where the main character (MC) isn't a jack-of-all-trades but relies on their wit to enhance their limited abilities. It makes for an engaging watch.
Characters: 8/10
The protagonist is likable, and the supporting characters exhibit genuine personalities. However, since the story is still in its early stages, there isn't much depth to comment on yet.
A minor issue I have is the inconsistency in character names. Some have Western names, while others mix Western and Korean. It would be cleaner if the author maintained a consistent naming convention throughout.
Overall, this book is definitely worth your time. It's currently one of my top picks among ongoing novels on the platform.
Hmm no harem then will not read this
I love the setting of the book ,the author is a good writer I rate 10/10 superb work ??
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this is the first book I have read where the FL didn't go to the bar after being betrayed and get raped after getting drunk
if only cuttlefish would get a translation that respects his skills
It was everything ! Really enjoyed it . thanks author