dreamy_charcoal
i think an author loves his book more than anything but can you readers also support me by rating my story it helps me a lot
from ch 1 all the hype then something is going to happen whether a person comes or phone calls. why write this kind of story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
This is the Holy Grail of web romance. The author took what already exists and worked on it in a way that improved it 1000%. This book should serve as an example for other authors who try to avoid clichés, and end up writing nonsense with the power levels all messed up. The recipe for a good story is there for all to see and depends on the author knowing how to make the most of it, and this one knew that.
It's off to a great start. the characters are lively. and overall it has a nice pacing. i will be waiting for new chapters. Good luck blahhhh
What a story! Character development, world-building and also the pace, superb, just super!! Wanna more chapters!! The fight scenes... freaking awesome!
finally something refreshing the plot is interesting and well placed and the characters are wholesome and most importantly the author doesn't add trash rubbish talks to fill the word count like most authors out there , I just hope author increases update speed and doesn't drop the novel
v v v v v v v v v. Really good.
oh my god. what a fabulous book wonderful
Really good so far.
Damn the first scene slapped me. I was not expecting that. I like the starting and i would definitely read more. I felt that it was a little rushed in the first chapter, but I go the hang of it with time. Im gonna drop in to see where it goes when more chapters come out.
Seriously loving this story, intimate scenes are better.... Don't bother about any negative comments, I really hope the story will be a long one...
You know who else can cast only fireballs? Exactly, Fire wizard from Clash of Clan. anyway, I like the premise. Hope to see the story goes on.
