Great book
wow....this is wonderful....i am glued .........
This book is just amazing, you would want to read it again after reading it once..
I was enjoying the flirtatious tension between the two mates, but I personally don’t do sharing so I couldn’t finish it unfortunately.
looking forward for the episodes
nice story♥️
Aku, Cuma lewat ehehheh
Mau... Izin promo
Jika, Berkenan... Mari mampir juga di novel, Aku?!
ADIK KU SUAMI KU
the blurb needs more context if you want to attract more readers. another paragraph would do if you want to keep it mysterious.
the narration has a melancholic tone to it.
tense consistency is an issue, as well as the grammar. but with some editing, this will be even better. nice work
are you still updating this book? I love the first one but don't want to start this one if it's not going to be finished.
Is the original finished?
Yo Mr.ZaFool is this worth it??
Bro, MLB doesn't finish.
He finishes about 50% of the stories.
He's an advanced version of MLB.