author is there any Yuri or ntr in harem hope not also is mc op or not and how big mc harem is
Okay, so I was waiting until there were at least 10 chapters before I gave a review. The story follows Elara as she's dragged into her favorite novel to save Caspian before he turns into a villain and goes off the deep end. The writing is good, I find it very enjoyable and engaging, and the world building is pretty interesting. These first ten chapters have been setting up the world and introducing characters but it's been pretty engaging thus far and I look forward to reading more. I would definitely recommend it!
This is the best one, and I can’t wait for more ???????????????
Another great story by this unnecessarily talented author
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nice book // solo lo hago por el fp jeje
I love this book. it is very interesting keep up with the writing. this is the most interesting novel I've read from a girl of your experience and age.keep it up
wow I love this book , keep it up author. my only problem is the chapters update, please more chapters ?????
totally unbiased review from the author.Here to say that this is my first ever webnovel so I might get some things wrong, make contradictions or other stuff. If you happen to see a mistake don't hesitate to tell me about it.I will be trying to post at least one chapter a day. Stay healthy!
So, this is definitely AI gen work. I am not just making things up here, I have attached proof. This isn't even the most advanced AI detector. You can literally use anyone on the internet to check how bad this is.Now onto the next part:The MCs character is annoying, he has a very shallow character. But I can ignore that as a blank slate for reader to self insert themselves like most Japanese protagonists. But even then I cannot ignore the story progression. Gandhari making decisions for him in front of Indira, while saying she'll save him. The annoying fact that Krishna already knew about his reincarnation but if that was not enough, he added oil to the fire by telling him more about himself, the system too. Just makes you wonder where this is going. He is going for Pandava friendship, while the Pandavas don't even want him. The only good thing I found in the 20+ chapters is the bow battle against Arjun, and that's it.Also, I'll mention something else which is very annoying. A lot of chapters are told from another view all over again. This is clearly a way to increase chapter count. Don't get me wrong, multiple POVs are a good thing, but what the author is doing instead is telling you a summary of first two chapters in the new 3rd chapter. This seems an honestly bad writing decision at best and a really evil ploy to scam us for more money while giving 2/3 of the content at worst. I'll give the author the benefit of the doubt and hope it's the former.Tbf neither the story decisions nor the characters are likeable. All the people you are supposed to like, you'll dislike and all the ones you are supposed to dislike, you will dislike too :). Basically nothing to root for in the story. I have read till 40+ chaps for now. Just one above the free version, I might sound critical, but this is a paid novel. I will be paying for it, so it has to be worth the money, and with the glaring issues I doubt it is that.All that being said. These are just the issues I had, so, I thought I'll point them out. However, I do know that writing is hard, and I wish you all the best in your future endeavors. Just be positive and try not to use AI, it strips the soul off your work, and you'll not really improve either.Good Luck Man.
best and captivating mind blowing and strikingly beautiful