Cute and funny mini stories with a strong FL. I read the raw of the ending and I love it. It makes me want more!
Hi everyone, this is the mandatory & selfish 5-star review from the author. ?I am proud of myself that I have published 20 chapters in this book. Breaking my record for all my previous books. ?And I hope to continue publishing even more chapters as this book is a very ambitious project.The story is an action-adventure story. It will be somewhat slow-paced as I try to build the world and characters. At least I will try my best to do so.This is a harem story. And the world is very dark so I expect a mature mindset when reading it.I am an amateur author. And I write mostly in my free time after work.That's why I request you to help me improve with your constructive criticisms in the comments, reviews, etc.Consider giving me Power Stones once in a while if you feel like it.With such small gestures I can know that my readers like the story I write. It will motivate me to continue writing for you.Thank you.
A very good story. Mc isn’t an idiot. Author has a tendency to prolong scenes but it’s not bad. One of the better stories on webnovel and you will def vote for it once you start reading it. Looking forward to more leveling up of the MC
I like the story theme which is new and not cliche, this is very refreshing among the monotonous cultivation novels????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hidden Gem ? for Historical and Kingdom Building lovers
the situation is totally repeating alice is probably going to adopt the child
Amazing WebNovel can’t get enough, I recommend
I'm giving the novel 5/5 because it's an incredible attempt at a first novel. It has some issues and the grammar needs work, so it's not my daily reading, but it's stellar for someone's first attempt at writing. I hope the author continues writing because they have a lot of potential. I'll look forward to future works. Cheers!
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
great story overall. I like the idea of having multiple characters being in the spotlight but I think the character development is a little slow because mc has an overpowered ability but does not use it to the fullest. Also in my opinion I believe the side missions take up a lot of chapters which makes it feel stale sometimes but it also adds to world background and more details overall to the story. solid read
Travel is interesting, to learn about new places, new cultures, traditions and thin places. Although if you do not live in the country yourself, at least for half a year, the ordinary life of a citizen or villager, you will not understand the mentality and how people live and breathe in the country. Since when a foreigner lives as a tourist, he looks at a different country ... for tourists, this is a kind of "from the waiting room" and not a look of the country itself.When you live, walk on foot, visit ordinary and not tourist markets, communicate with various members of society, you better begin to understand the country and its culture.Something like this))
Loved it! Really well developed and a fun read! Would recommend for anyone who wants an exciting sci fi novel to read. Thank you for posting it here!