Pretty interesting so far (20 chapters).The premise is original and the realisation is well done. Translation is quite good.A bit early to say any more but this is far more promising than 99% of the tripe Qidian is producing these days. I don't think we'll get a Lord of the Mysteries level novel but this should be somewhat nice to read at least.
I really enjoyed this novel. The MC is OP and invincible always and in every situation. The novel is well written and shouldn't be taken as some serious Shakespearean piece of art. It's very fun to kick back, relax and just read.
I was wondering if Ye Qiu would accept male disciples in the future. Only accepting females disciples would be boring and I am not really into harem. I am looking forward to the development of the story.
I really like this novel. Let me see I spent the hole night reading this novel in a bit more than 5 hours without a break. I can't seem to wait for the new chapters of this nice novel.
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I’m caught up with the Translations. So far so good but there are a few holes, that it’s quite worrying. We don’t know if they’re inconsistencies yet since the Translations haven’t reached that point yet. So far good quality writing and perhaps even the best Dad-Novel ever.It’s still to soon to judge as not enough chapters. But I feel very optimistic. You can never tell with CNs. This can become polygamy from a flick of switch or get ruined by some BS.
This is another F*cking awesome novel by Xin Feng. This story starts with an ordinary person in a world similar like ours getting a System-like Encyclopedia in his head.That Encyclopedia is very awesome. It has many types of knowledge in it.The first knowledge that Lin Fan opened was Hand cake knowledge also known as- "GODLY HAND CAKE". Girls eat that cake and climax, boys eat that cake and *cough*, you know...something like that. That is the first step for our MC towards being a Godly-Dude. Second knowledge was about Fortune telling which he got because there was an old man who opened a shop near him and was a fake fortune teller. The system gave Lin Fan the fortune telling knowledge because that old guy admired MC the most and with the encyclopedia, his fortune telling 120% correct. These knowledge are all connected to the people around the MC. The person who admire him the most, the person who loved him the most, the person who is MC's best friend and like this. People who don't accept his Fortune telling being real get their faces "slapped". Now, I think I should be talking about the personality of the MC, Lin Fan.He is a righteous, kind, humorous, and a little dense person. There was a time when the MC caught a very large group of child traffickers but when the time came for the parents to take their kidnapped children back home, many people refused to recognize their own blood just because they were crippled and could not be treated for their entire life. This made me angry, very angry. But the MC was so Godd@mn great gut that he made bet with many rich people which if they lost then they had to play with those abandoned children and give them toys.This novel is a very good read. It has Martial arts, Face Slapping, the MC trying to be the most popular, Harem(there are a little clue here and there about this until chapter 350 or something, so yeah I guess it is) and last but not the least is that people climax after eating the hand cake. :P
Nice story, please add more teasing in erotic ways with harem characters . Loved the novel very much and i hope the harem wont be so big without characters development
You have a good idea. I feel like I am not in the story. I am suggesting that you try to show instead of telling what characters are doing. here is websitehttp://***.wright.edu/~david.wilson/eng3830/creativewriting101.pdf
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I swear to the mother of demons lilith that if webnovel brutally murders this novel, for the god forbid SECOND TIME! mass suicide shall occur with the right amounts of negative google reviews plus the First impact due to the amounts of dark emotions generated by the victims of webnovel psychological ploy. this the second coming of jesus christ so please pay webnovel to pick this up, he can only die twice afterall.
Its just me or this story getting too much repetitive, it is a good novel but I feel like if it goes on like this i dont know how much longer I can keep with this novel. I think its a time to introduce some plot to this story....