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The characters, the events and the plot are quite stunning. The words used are wonderful and catchy. I hope I can be a writer like you. Keep it up!
One of the more interesting and better translated novels so far. There are detail inconsistencies but at least it flows like proper English.MC has an insanely broken powering mechanic but it's looking like the story will focus more on world development, politics, and character interactions which is leagues better than a non stop powering fic.Author also tries to explain some logical/scientific inconsistencies which somewhat works as long as you don't think too much about it.Easily one of the top 3 stories we got for the past month.
Bit slow at the begining i mean lets be honest at the time he was lether working you were also like when is he gonna slay some dragons but for the rest it’s a fun read and there are some worldbuilding element in the first few chapters so it allright.
Very interestkng premise, and good execution. The main character is interesting and charasmatic, and he makes this a very fun read. Overall, the story is reall good.Keep up the good work.
Interesting story progress, moderate pace of story, and characters look good so far. Keep up with the good work, and also don't forget to update more often.
Hey Guys author of My vampire system here. This is my Third system book! Set in Modern day time , based around underground fighting and gang crime. This is under a non exclusive contract so had to upload on a different account
Wow... Great Novel It's Mature and Entertaining, Thanks to the Writer,I didn't waste my time Reading it,Such Novels like this will Increase the rate of People Using this App or Site,I wish to rate more than 100stars If Only I could ?,I just wish the Novel should Continue
I generally never write reviews, however, this novel truly truly irritated me. I had such high hopes - expecting various business elements (like those in God of Money) but all we get is a ‘misunderstanding clown fiesta’. Emphasis on the clown fiesta. Conflict (singular) in chapters 1-100 could have been solved in under 5 chapters had anyone decided to use even 5% of their brain. Its all set up to show that everyone besides the MC is a gold digger while building on some really unrealistic power-trips and lackluster (and equally unrealistic) revenge plot.
I’d love to nitpick but its honestly not even worth the effort. Just use this review as a benchmark and save some time. [Dropped at Ch 100]
I'm a sucker for kingdom building and historical fiction. This got both.
Now, I don't like some things but they are minor. Grammar is good, mistakes are non-existent.
You may feel frustrated by the plot sometimes but you can easily ignore it. At least I did, but again, I'm brain dead after reading too many Machine Translations.
Good work author.
May the monke gods bless you.
Here, have some holy monke bathwater.