This has to be the utmost underrated book ever! The grammar and English was perfect, with barely any mistakes. The sentence lengths were perfect, allowing for a smooth read. The mc also has a drastic character change/ development. It's satisfying to see him go from a pathetic loser to a powerful mc. I hundred percent recommend this book to other readers looking for a slow paced and smooth read.Good job Author and keep it up!
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I would like to give it more stars but after reading up to 100 chapters I can not. The writing is great and I think the story had great potential but the MC kills the story.
He is a college student that in the game he is a complete idiot or has no common sense on anything. The Author tries to get away with this on the fact that the MC was from the country side. I find it highly unlikely that even someone from the country side would have never been expose to any stories or games related to cultivation or even fantasy. If that was the case, the Author should have said the MC grew up in a Cave where they just learn how to make fire. I tired to keep reading but once I got to chapter 100, I just can take it any more.
This is some really great work. I really enjoyed reading it and I would 100% recommend it. One thing I want to add, some paragraphs are long, make them shorter.
Overall, it's amazing!
the Novel is great,i dont find any major problems regarding grammatical except for some minor problem including typos that i can found every now and then.
story development as the author said in hos self review,a little bit slow in pace,i dont mind if u want tl slow some things to build some set up for future purpose.
character design,the characters design are great,regarding their personality tho but u can try to polise ur phrase regarding what kind of situation their get that changed their feeling about mc more.
updating stability is good enough as long as u dont drop this.
world background,for the world background tho,i really appreciate about your slow pace novel but it will great if u can established some important rules regarding the contract first like is there any time limit for the mission? what kind of gift the curse give him? everytime i read your novel i always wondering about that.
lastly i really appreciate your similar that have quite similar theme with the old good the world god only knows anime/manga,i just hope that we can see more character development from the mc tho,keep up the good work,author!
Just an update on my 'updating schedule.' It will change weekly, but I should be able to release 5~7 days a week! Hehehehehe~~... Thanks for the love everyone.
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I don't know who the people rating this with 5 stars are, because this is a terrible story, I imagine if it was translated well, it would still only be a slightly smaller trash fire.
Even if the MC was a compelling character, there are no good foils, no-one acts realistically, they are either cartoon bad guys with no foresight who seem to hold a death grudge with the MC, or fawning yes-men who believe MC is omniscient, and omnipotent.
considering the title is also the inciting incident, I'm not sure how the author will stretch this book to have any meaningful incidents for much past where it is when he will probably conquer the world and be the lord high supercallifragilisticexpialidocious supreme ultra mega commander of the Mary Sue Earth Kingdom
The story doesn't match the synopsis and the title.
I think they are publishing a story whitout having the rights so they use the title and synopsis of 重生红龙：自律就变强 and put the chapters of another novel while modifying the names of the characters (western names) to make it less noticeable.
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