I would've liked this story more if Davis wasn't so reliant on some op item he found and based his entire growth around it
Me too
I wasn't expecting much when I started this story, and I was right... For the climax battle at least. The epilogue and every other part except the very start of the story was very satisfying to read. My only regret was that there isn't a more detailed ending to the Heroes, the rushed ending and the lack of development of the later summoned heroes.
Why is it end so fast x.x
Absolutely rubbish book! The MC who was in the military in the future goes back to the past but is still a fucking simp. He has NO advantage at all, he's not smart or even so strong. His first major battle he gets lost for half a year and almost dies. Then he finds out his wife was given out and he does absolutely nothing because in his words "there's nothing I can do"Normally I read 100 chapters before judging a book, but I couldn't even get to 20 without getting irritated. Don't waste your time with it!
I am at chapter 39, and so far, I like the concept but do wish the writing was more fluent. it has the feel of direct translation with no polish. so. writer do not give up on this. I look forward to read more.
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amei o livro muito bom mesmo ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
GUYS, I FIXED MY MISTAKE!CHAPTERS 01 TO 40 ARE NOW FREE TO READ ON VOLUME 00!!!You can follow up from Ch41 on regular volume 01, without having to worry about paying for chapters so early on the story.Enjoy!!!
This is actually a nice gamer story, one of the points is that [gamer body] and [gamer mind] weren't nerfed, they where removed so there could actually be some kind of struggle. Anyway onto the review.
1-Writing Quality: The quality is good and there's some grammar stuff happening but too few to notice outright, it's has a pleasant writing. I'd give full mark if some of the chapters didn't feel short and others got long because of times, yes it's flavor but if you skip it it becomes short again.
[4 Stars Here]
2-Story Development: We'll this one is kind of a 50/50 right now, I guess I could consider the MC spontaneous, yes he does have plans but he gets side tracked sometimes(happens often) but it doesn't change the flow of the story it just leaves more questions and build up on pause(body snatcher self-made quest).
[3 Stars Here]
3-Character Design: The characters are well made, even some minor role characters like OG body's mom. Although the MC does act his physical age (He acts grown up for his age but also acts not so grown up most times) so there's that, I don't really have complaints here besides a few minimal things.
[4 Stars Here]
4-Updating Stability: What is stability? From the history we can see that also month updates where happening but now? yeah that's not happening.
[3 Stars]
5-World Background: The world is detailed and has some level of information regarding the scenes and those around it, we get a mild view of where the MC lives in early chapters overall it's good.
[4 Stars Here]
Opinion: The book is definitely a must read, for me as in the good must read but to some it might be a must read to know what not to read
Please don't push me past the edge, if another chapter is not published, I might really have to start reading it on lnmtl, I don't want to!!
good story. I got confused about the unit of length. how many meters are 1 krins??????...............................................................