This story was quite unique and I totally loved it, the way events are written and the characters kept me hooked throughout the chapters, good work, can't wait to find out more in upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'll say this, the story is interesting as far as the whole narrative beats and everything but the grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation hold this story back heavily. If the author can clean that up. I think the novel will be even more enjoyable.
tho book is absolutely amazing ? and it has a certain set up that makes it both extremely easy to guess and read well also being able to surprise you.
a great read.even the seemingly 'ordinary' and 'mundane' things are written so well that I just couldn't stop reading until it finished!and it's not even fiction!and the pics are too good, i can imagine how good of a place u visited.it's just great.author-san, i now know that i need a trip to beach and farms to get some relief from this stressful life.
Translation is absolutely unacceptable, Horrid, and terrible.
1 star purely cause of horrendous editing. words are cut in the middle with new line. sentences get new line in the middle of it. either someone is spamming enter through the whole novel, or someone is copy/pasting from bad html page.
I'm sorry, I really tried to enjoy reading this novel. But the quality is really bad. I feel like my neurons are committing sepuku as I write this. Please find a proof reader first of all.
As for the story, nothing out of the ordinary at least up to the I read. And that is the first impression.
A good story, better than many works on this site.
Are there any other races in this world, or only humans? I don't remember any other intelligent species being mentioned.
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the worst fucking novel, i ever saw the strongest char joining a bunch of guys just because he needs some fucking idiots as friends so that he can help them level up. by wasting his own time . the mother ****er is doing it because he needs a girl to lick her ass.
Pretty good all around if you're looking for something with game elements this is one of the good ones that I've seen so far. Can't quite remember the name but it reminds me of close combat mage.
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