Pretty good so far. I like the concept of an Immortal faction. Certain parts can be kind of confusing but overall a good read.
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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Very interesting so far. I like the video game aspect of the story. However, i am not sure if the world is a game or a real-world with game ability. Maybe it will be shown later.
First of all, the cover is awesome. For the story it's equally great. I hope for Allaine to rise soon and support others like him. Maybe a gang would be fine also. An interesting story.
Maybe this is too early for a review since there is only one chapter. But this story definitely have potential. I will keep reading and keep the spirits high author.
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I think i could absolutely enjoy your story but the grammar is really bad. I am sorry that i am saying it this direct, but maybe you have a friend or someone you know who can help. Otherwise try to find someone online who would help you and continue writing!
Just amazing , author did a great job in binding one with the stories .Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. This is something different and incredible at the same time.Brilliant writing sir.
Story was good in the beginning then became a story about his girlfriend not my cup of tea smh it was such promising start that fight with goku fire though good luck with your story though.