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Nice story and Plot but there is no update for a long time, hope author start updating novel like earlier...Thanks for the Chapter........
This novel is good. At first, it was a little confusing but it become clearer. It is good, the Translation could be better though, but I don't have a choice even If I complained here.
5 stars because I am looking forward for to this book...from what I have read this book a little bit different from the rest of clichés out there...
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OMG! I really love this story ? I can't stop reading. It's so fluffy, hot and funny at the same time. What a great work, I'll wait for another chapter.
Nice. This story has lots of potentials. First, the writing quality, though there are some typos, it didn't distract me from reading that much. Stability of updates. From what I've seen, the author has stable updates so far. Story Development. The flow of the story is nice and detailed. I don't feel anything rushed. And there are a lot of surprising events as well. Character Design. Though they say Rufus is a pushover, the author made it well to be his redeeming quality. It's just sad that Harley died as well. The other supporting characters too are likable. World Background. It is interesting.This will definitely stay in my colls and read for more. All the best to the author and the book :D
this story is so amazing. im so glad we have people like mob_mobbers to write these masterpieces. i read this book every single day and its help me out so much i love you mob_mobbers please create more stories like this
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Book was great UNTIL the author went and trashed everything he worked on for the first few hundred chapters. He literally destroys the whole planet they live on and tosses them onto another planet where humans are just slaves. All the characters, world building, etc. gone in one chapter. What gets me is after there planet with all their family was destroyed there is no grieving. They are just kind of like well that sucks now let's continue. That being said if you can get over that the book is good. The writing quality is good, the release rate is good, the grammar is good. I dropped it about 50 chapters after they blew up the original planet.
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maybe you should put this novel on the fanfiction section to get more traction to your novel.
just a suggestion
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