Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
Great , continue this novel is good one of the best novels I have ever read for please keep updating and don’t drop it .
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I don't exactly see why the reviews made thus far hype this novel up. The writing quality is decent, but I noticed grammatical issues in just about every paragraph. The update stability is, from what I can see, not great. The last chapter released to the public was 11 days ago. Story Development is actually the best part of this novel, I even gave it 4 stars. Put simply, the pacing is good and I enjoyed reading for quite a while. The protagonist is fun, but other characters feel rather robotic. World background is a generic RPG situation, not much to say.
Overall MEH. Felt no intensity in intense moments, and can't really relate to any characters.
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Hahaha...maganda ung takbo ng storya...hindi ko nga lang maintindihan kung ano ba ung tunay na pag ka-tao ni Lily...
Currently 7 chapters are out and novel is really enjoyable and interesting. I usually don't login and rate a novel and this is good enough reason so keep working hard author ??
so far good, netorare scenes are well detailed and has variations each time also the story progress quite fast would recommend to any ntr readers
Hey Author, when's the next chapter? Or will this be uncompleted?
Beautiful!It would be great if more update will be released.Or, should I just wait until this is completed?
bro you're a very god writer. and this is one of my fav story (on mt
Alright i read 20 chapters in, and yeah its quite solid especially with the author clarifying its their first rodeo i believe. Now its not without its faults, lets get the big hurdle out of the way, the main character is a big mary sue. Not really a spoiler as around 18 chapters in its revealed hes had "sword and gun training" and that he was " a genius" who quit because he found it boring. Not to mention his perfect figure and attractive features the first chapter in.
Look, you can enjoy this for what it is especially when there is a lot worst, there are no overbearing cliches here. Well aside from Mr Perfect MC. He does struggle but at a superficial level. Also minor gripe, his actions and thoughts being somewhat contradictory? He thinks others are a burden while risking his hide for an inhaler, that isnt to say human beings aren't flexible and contradictory in nature. So thats not really a major issue but i felt it should atleast be addressed. OH, lets talk about the only female 20 chapters in who's an office worker who coincidentally is a kendo three time championship who also coincidentally has a kantana sword becuase coincidentally it was her first day on the job... Idk it could happen but very unlikely and it just had me rolling my eyes E N ways thats about it. Have a good one.