I want to talk about some strange parts in the story that i think would need to be addressed :In chapter 903 there is a paragraph that i think should be removed which is “ In fact, it was not originally designed this way, but Adrian with a Genesis Dragon is already too dangerous when it comes to balance. He was also crossing the threshold of the necessary life energy as well which is why they needed to de-power him a little. If he became an arch demon after acquiring a Genesis Dragon, then he will steam roll over the current dungeons at this rate”.I have to ask why write this paragraph at all, does it mean that it nerfs players that get too powerful because of their own efforts? That just makes the highest leveled players restricted because of that and it isn’t fair for them. Does that mean Eldritch gets nerfed because he is more powerful than Equinox? Even if it is a reason to extend the length of the story which i am glad about, i do think that nerfing the character for such a reason is a bit…unfair. Also in chapter 1072 there is a skill called Cleansing Palm which has the effect of making the target unable to use their skills and spells for 5 minutes , i have to say that skill is way too powerful even if it has restrictions but for it to work on Eldritch who has divinity, has resistance, artifacts and is instant is really unbalanced, it maybe more believable to make it work for maybe half a minute but disabling anyones skills and spells even their revival skills and spells for 5 minutes just doom’s them.Even if it cant be used on NPC’s or in direct combat, it is an op godly assassination skill that anyone gets hit by is straight up gone. There may be more examples but i have forgotten them or have not reached them, or maybe my points get debunked later on in the story, i may be wrong even and i probably have missed something or misinterpreted it so just take this as a rant from an idiot lol, so eh whateva. This is just nitpicking for a story this long and the story is really great and i find the characters are made well with some arcs focusing on them instead of the MC which i find nice.
Honestly, one of the more interesting novels I've read.
wow!!! I'm completely in love with the dynamic between Drake and Lillie!!!❤ Can't wait to read the next chapter!!?
Waiting for the next chapter I’m so excited for the revelations soon ❤️
nice book en interesting
Won’t let me read past 1709 after that it go back to 185 characters
A story with love hate relationship... want to see how the story turns into
I don’t like the story, very disturbing psychologically with all the violence.
Can’t get past chapter 26 ! I love the story but sucks I can’t read it anymore
need more updates please
I love it from beginning to end, I really recommend it!!!
Absolutely love this book! Read it every day, chapters at a time and loved every second. I literally woke up looking for updates. The writing is great. The story is great. The characters sexy and intriguing. I love all the different perspectives. This is one I will buy in print and re-read a lot!