Writing quality is great, I don't have to reform the sentences in my head.
*****
Updates are prety good(not the "5 updates per 3 days now wait month" style). ****
Story seems to come along nicely, not breaking apart every 3 chapters like other novels. *****
Characters feel alive, realistic. *****
Book too small to judge background yet, so **** until expansion.
Overall, it's a good read. 4.6 rounds up to 5
btw is this the correct way to do spoilers?
Well written, it has an interesting system based on biomass, almost like chrysalis but not exactly. I recomend this to anyone who has enjoyed the chysalis novel and wants something new and not the same evolution system as the humdreds on the web.
The writing quality was not the most outstanding but still a 4 and a half star, it comes with the newer stories and should get better overtime. The best thing about the text was that it was able to draw me in with its descriptions and describe to me the exact scene.
The updating schedual is also something that comes with newer novels, but if this novel picks up traction the author might make the novel a scedual. Please dont drop it.
The story development was at times a little dull, like how the was almost no action with the parents of the mc, or the fast developement that skipped some parts of the story. Overall, another 4 and a half.
Continued in the commets.
Based on evolution! Try it I am sure this book will not disappoint you.
If you are still dissatisfied with it, Give me a review on the shortcoming.
English is not my native language, I use Grammarly for correction.
If you find any grammar mistakes. comment on that paragraph.
Pretty cool story, and I'm not too into thrillers, it's an over all interesting concept. Other than your grammatical mistakes, and poof choice of words here and there, it's a good read.
Keep up your work, and practice english a bit ;)
Such a Epic Story with realism. can't believe. this is so compelling. enjoyable!! too long to read
From the synopsys itself this novel hooks you up. Such a unique and a weird universe in this novel is set. I can vividly see everything happening in the chapters because of the author’s amazing ability to describe the world.
The Main Character has a tinge of mystery and absolutely deserves more attention. Im looking forward to read more chapters.
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All in all the idea is interesting. The origin of abnormalities is mentioned very well. Further the setting is well defined. What bugged me was the paragraphing issue. Over in all, the novel will do well as long as the author grows with the idea.
This is a good story with an interesting plot and cool characters. A reader can tell right off the bat that the plot is action-packed. An entertaining read. I enjoyed it.
Keep it up.
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This story is amazingly interesting.
Y'all should read it to the end. I strongly recommend this book to anyone who's into romance thingy ︎
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The plot development iS good one. I hope the author is able top continue this work and provide a unique arc to the story. can't wait to read more./
The MC throughout history lives up to his name because he only dedicates himself to being the slave of other people and I accept everything they tell him to do without protest, just stop being a pathetic slave to a bigger one that follows faithful whatever order they give, there is no autonomy. If you want to read a story of a person blindly following someone without complaining and getting nothing in return this is for you on the other hand this is absolute rubbish.