All I have to say about this story, the book captivates with its rich character development and intriguing themes of fate and choice. The interplay between Eli and Smith creates emotional depth, well that my thoughts on it. Keep writing.
Great novel. how did you make the text on the picture tho. pls answer.
This book was a captivating journey from start to finish.
Deadass this book already has me crying and I'm only 4 chapters in even though that's the max as of now. Like I love everything about it other than the Grammer and the main character has me interested and cracking up with his "Luck
Personally in my completely unbiased POV this is a great story.-John Royfail
I love the idea of having a protagonist who uses technology instead of magic it is original ✨
I'm so confused why this book doesn't have as many readers yet, it's leaves above a lot of the other romance novels I've read here on Webnovel!I'm only on chapter 5 so my opinions may change, but I love everything so far. The brothers are great and have distinct characters and personalities, and the MC seems very sweet and caring.The romance is great so far, it's sweet and properly developed while also satisfying (great spicy scenes as well ;)) and I'm enjoying it a lot.The setting isn't set in the past in China, which I find refreshing. I don't mind it, but it's nice to read something different every once in a while! The accents and dialect of the characters reflect that as well, which is a detail not many authors bother including.All in all I'm genuinely enjoying the story so far, and I'm happy I found a worthwhile novel to give my power stones to in the future!
This is my entry for Webnovel Rising Star II... And the start of my RAIDS ONLINE book series.
Как опытный боець в вопросах манг и ранобэ скажу свое мнение.История поначалу захватывающия быстро деградирует в сторону гаремника нулевых, сюжет очень быстро сошёл на нет, гг несмотря на сильные ограничения сразу находит способ стать имбой, все девушки которых добавляють в сюжет, созданы лишь для того чтобы попасть в гарем гг, никакого развития второстепеных персонажей, более того некоторые из них откровено пустые и даже лишние в истории, гг вроде умный и жёсткий, крамсает бандитов направо и налево, но стоит увидеть девушку сразу отключаеться от логики и разума, много сцен просто для пафоса гг, конечной цели у автора как завершить историю НЕТ, если ему удастся как нибудь написать историю до конца, даю зуб что все девушки стануть женами гг, прорисовка мира, политики, культури, магии, откровено плохая.Моя оценка 4 из 10Единственный плюс рисовка в манхве хорошая, художник действительно постарался, без нього не поставил бы даже 2 звёзд
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I wanna see a new novel but a different god :)
I love how the author made it special and different from other books