The book has an interesting start. It is well described and well structured world background.. Looking forward to be it in top 50. Well done author
MC seems to be a creepy sis/loli con while also being a bit of a dick, typical no one around him knows he is a God at video games (was a pro at some point) and all of a sudden now he is ok with them seeing him do well while he plays it down as though it isnt hard. Seems to be a cookie cutter MC is stupid good at games book with a sis/loli attachment added in.Just weird and kinda creepy.
I like it and hope it gets picked.............................................................................................................................
An excellent book with very few gramatical and spelling mistakes. Rarely can an author tie together such a chaotic stream of events in a way that feels just as rushed for the characters as it does for the readers without losing the sense of meaning and the stability of the world. The only fault in the this novel (series?) is that there isn’t more available to read! Not sure why there were only 2 chapters of a volume 2 released with no further updates or info but I would love to see the next chapters in our titular characters’ lives.
i can only give this one star because it is disappointing.the author lured all of his readers from castle of black iron into reading this by promising that this is in the same world as castle of black iron and characters would appear.however, it was the demons that appeared and after being bombed by the chinese readers when the novel ended, the author apologized and said that the 3rd book is coming out and it is where the story will really tie in with castle of black iron.so yea, here we have a novel built by lies...........
I am sorry, but this is sadly a good novel. I made it 21 chapters in, I quit because there is no logic in the story. An enemy ’s troops die to the MC, so he leveled up. That makes no sense. Also has some anti west prejudices, with characters made at the “west” for no reason. The only way for this to be funny is if the “dragon country” is Wales. Also a translation of adventurer was changed to hero for no reason.
Liked it at first. Then it turned crappy with all the new **** that got introduced. 1400002038203820049988888888888888800000000hdjcnrbxlwhdodnfjxlemfido
This novel is a potato if you threw it into a bunch of other potato novels you would not know which novel was which. What do we do to potatos we smash eat then **** them out. At least its better than corn level i dont even remember to review them i just assume people read them for no other reason than casually eating popcorn becuase your bored out of your mind or dont want to try and make a hole in a wall with your head.
Yes , i know this story have racism however , the reviews are meant to be constructive.... not a place to complain.If you can ignore the racism, you will be brought into a world which monster pet evolution couldnt achieve. Mc is actually trying hard to achieve his goals of upgrading the monsters. More time and effort needs to been dedictated for the mc to upgrade his monsters.THIS IS NOT FOR PEOPLE WHO LIKE VERY OP MC WITH NO HARDWORK(MONSTER PARADISE) This is one of the best trial read i have read and its rating is getting destroyed by ONE racist comment . Ffs ppl
Writing quality: third grade. The author doesn't know anything at all about English, and it shows. They constantly misuse punctuation marks, have no clue of the difference between your and you're, the language used is basic, and it's littered with typos and grammar errors. 2/5Update stability: no clue, but giving it a 1/5 because this abomination deserves a low overall rating.Story development: missing. As of chapter 89, nothing of any note has happened except for the absolute worst examples of tropes. I rate this a 1/5 and would rate it lower if it was possible. My actual rating in this category would easily be a zero.Character design: the worst. I haven't seen dumber characters on this entire platform, and considering I've seen literally hundreds of novels on the Webnovel platform, that's truly saying something. The main character's brain could be used to forge Mjolnir, the best friend is the most annoying combination of best friend tropes, the ex-wife is irredeemably stupid, and... well, everyone is the dumbest version of their particular collections of cliches that it's possible to be. 1/5 and I would recommend to this author in particular that they keep their day job, because being an author is just something they shouldn't do.World background: abysmal. The bog standard modern-day face slapping novel, but the absolute worst version of that in every category. 1/5Overall: I had low expectations but was somehow still disappointed. This showed up in my WN weekly recommendations for some unknown reason (someone probably sold their soul to the devil), and I started reading it solely because the chapters weren't locked. I regret it and wish I could light the brain cells containing the memory of this failed abortion on fire and burn them to complete and utter nonexistence. I regret very little about my life so far, but reading 89 chapters of this garbage excuse for a novel is one of those rare regrets. Author, I hope that you have to answer every seventh question you're asked with the phrase "in my butt" for the next four and a half years.
Im out at 350 chapter.I really like novel in our modern time/on earth. But like always author had to put racism... of course classic conflict with Japan... MC got some power and feel like superman, don't afraid nothing! Goes everywhere and show his mussle, because he doesn't has brain.Romance? If you like pokemon-catch its for you. It is like: MC meet new girl, he dosn't need to do anything, girl in next 5 minutes will open her legs for him! Why? Because he is super handsome! And his dimple are...!!! WTF almost in every chapter author need to write how handsome he is with dimple!Enemies? Only stupid arrogant charactes without brain like MC.
Nice story so sad it ended at vol 1 hoping for the rest worst cliffhanger in my life ?