At the moment the he novel is at about a 100 chapters, and I think it's fair to give it a review now. For starters the novel greatly exceeded my expectations. I expected some more lame-ass faceslapping, but for once I got a decent fan-fic. Yes that's right, fan-fiction. Lets be clear, this sure as hell is written by a football fan as fan-fiction, with tons of known players like fabregas, bale and Walcott making guest appearances, alongside some imaginary players. It isn't bad at all, in fact it's fairly decent, the plot goes on nicely, and it has a nice and peaceful atmosphere. It reminds me a lot of those kingdom-building novels, as that really is what it is. We watch Tang En, or Tony Twain, or TT as I like to call him build a football empire. We watch as he picks up to be pro players, and builds some players himself. It's a light entertaining read with some amount of info-dumping and discoursing upon football tactics.
Now on to the bad. Yes there are problems. Any and all conversations feel robotic as ****, and really weird. They don't sound like humans, but more like NPC's interacting. There are equally weird filler arcs, where our main character accidentally kidnaps a loli, and barely evades the FBI. Clearly filler. Character development can get weird at times too. In short the writing is fairly terrible. THe characters themselves however, do have personality. That itself is itneresting, though bound by stereotypes the author believes in.
it's straight up trash........................................................................................................................................
this i bet would be amazing cause i thinks it's about a man treasure
hunting for loot and i bet he has a system and some companion -like monsters by by his side which would be pretty damn cool. also i hope it's not harem or he has a 1-dimensional so called great master teaching him because i want him to be a lone wolf the whole time because there's alot of mc 's saying they don't want to meddle with other people but then like 20 chaps later he's rolling into every dungeon he goes into with some squad the author put together in like 10 minutes. that just sucks i hope this isn't one of those novels with major cliches with a fresh take on novels like tomb raider and like to see him building confidence to do things like the tomb raider in that one really popular tomb raider series where at first there clumsy < nervous , unconfident and then 100 chaps later they build up confidence which leads to great character development which i would like to see. in other novels here is the only character development.
first chap : little level 1 scrub that can be crushed like an ant by any person thats a little pussy and doesn't have a life
chap 3 : fearless person who wants to have good life and make their familys life great etc.
chap 100 : MC = Chuck Norris and leroy
please have good character development , that's all i want
(plus no 1-d cold side bae + harem) who also has formidable background
p.s sorry for massive review
Typical hiding MC's background nonsense. MC let's himself be walked all over. overall super cliche trying to force out revenge and surprise of oh look my husband is rich.
This novel is so bad I had to sign up and tell you how **** it is. I didn't get further than the first 150 chapters.
Let me paraphrase the plot line: "Give me X amount of time and I will duel you to death and trample you under my sheer MC ness"
The author loves this trope and uses it every time he introduces an opponent that the MC can't beat right now. In fact some of the major plot lines revolve around dueling people to the death since they slighted MC.
MC is also reincarnated, which normally Authors use to make the MC more mature and wiser or cunning. This story's MC is neither of those and you would think his background as former mercenary would at least make him a good judge of character, but nope he has the IQ of an arrogant young master when meeting people.
This story doesn't deserve a translation. I want to give this all 1 stars, but that would be unfair to the translators since they are not responsible for this abomination of fiction.
For all new readers out there. I really recommend this novel for a good read but should be read first at wuxiaworld before reading at QI. And also, try to read the link below for more info:
http://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/wuxiaworlds-formal-response-with-screenshots.43043/
Website : qidian china
Views : 4.50 million
Rating : 8.7(4146)
Chapters : 1146
Status : ongoing
rank : 65
Word count : 2.74 million
author rank : lv5
Some will love it some will hate it. Me? hmmmmm i wont tell you. And you should not watching rewievs and decide for your self if you are gonna read it or not. :D
Congratulations and keep up the good work, I always support you. The novel game this time is cool, it feels like we are playing the game ourselves, continue. level up.
Drop this it’s not worth it, just read my new story this one is effecting in a bad way so I’m dropping but I’ll be giving you a new one instead it’s called days gone under the shade it’ll short in the word count but long in chapters and you can suggest me the worlds you want me to add cause this story will be on a multiversal level eventually.
Bring some tissue if you'll read this novel, you'll probably need it.
"Love is in the air, you cant touch but you can feel it, and you know it exist."
well, bla bla bla.
Please support this novel.
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it's really good! but it has a lot of ntr vibes that I don't like...........................................................................