May this novel be a novel that is not ruined with harem. I pray for thee.Lotta characters are needed. I feel like this is stupid. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I don't always write reviews, but when I do, it's either because the novel is really good, or really bad. Despite all the positive reviews, in my opinion, this belongs in the latter.First of all, the positive. The world background is unique, and certainly above average. The relationship between characters is decent. Now, the bad things.The most important thing, the humor. While I did chuckled once in awhile, for the most part, it's just painful to read. The author tried too hard to force the comedy. The parts where it should be serious, the author still tried to add humor. All the Elders and Sect Leader acts like a bunch of 12 yearsold. There are certain situations where comedy comes from surprise or the suddenness of the situation. However, the way this novel is written completely take away the surprise part and ruin the humor. Most importantly, I don't know if it's the translator or the author, but using vulgarities to force the humor is just immature. Conversations between characters are completely devoid of witticism. Characters swore and cursed at each other is just...tasteless. Once in a blue moon, it sort of worked, but the rest of the time, it's just overdone and became vulgar instead. Sometimes, the vulgarities even ruined the part where it's actually funny. Let me give you an example, the MC were talking with a girl about how bad his Master was. The conversation were going just fine, then he dropped a sentence along the line "you might aswell tell me to masturbate over my Master getting gang raped"....It's not like i'm over sensitive, but it's just tasteless. That is just pure vulgarity, not comedy. If you want an actual humorous xanxia, try A Will Eternal. This novel is just a really bland and vulgar slapstick comedy.
Haha, well...that was quick. Since I only got to read chap 1, I'll write my review on that basis. The author wrote emotions with so much feeling, I was very absorbed in it. I really like the writing style and with a little bit of editing, this could almost win wpc! GOODLUCK!
This is stupid. In the 8th chapter, MC receives a system reward called the Principle of Arrays. Suddenly he is provided with the comprehension of all sorts of arrays in the world. Too OP cheats provided too casually.
My brain hurts, I lost at least a dozen brain cells just from one chapter and I could feel myself losing those brain cells…………………………………………..
Gran novela amigo, espero que no lo dejes nunca, realmente me encanto leer, aunque no haya leido las novelas de los mundos que estará el MC me gustó, primera vez que me gusta leer este tipo de novelas, y tengo que decir que, exelente.Gran novela amigo, espero que no lo dejes nunca, realmente me encanto leer, aunque no haya leido las novelas de los mundos que estará el MC me gustó, primera vez que me gusta leer este tipo de novelas, y tengo que decir que, exelente.Gran novela amigo, espero que no lo dejes nunca, realmente me encanto leer, aunque no haya leido las novelas de los mundos que estará el MC me gustó, primera vez que me gusta leer este tipo de novelas, y tengo que decir que, exelente.
Need more recommendations like this !.....
This Great is pretty the zombie genre is time overused but this book is pretty awesome I like the game aspect of it I like how jun gets really powerful threw out the story he's one of my favorite characters
Hello, this is my first Fanfiction! I was very bored and have never done this so thank you so much for reading, and let me know what you like and dislike! Thank you for your time!
I love these kind of stories, goody two shoes heroes are so boring. This is the equivalent of hitting the G spot, really liked it. 10/10, would recommend for sure.
Refreshing story this is the kind of novel i was looking for many characters and the mc is not op and has to train just like others and it is a welcome change from the regular chinese view of cultivation and breaking through levels.Unique world and many countries and the M looks like he is african i am waiting for the new upadates ...... Keep up the good work theonionjunktion
while there's the occasional wring word used in places, I assume that is due to translation .I LOVED this story. I adored little Zaos and his never yield attitude. it was great. Some Character's story can be heartbreaking, others are amazing in their depth and uniqueness. check out the story. I'm sure others will enjoy it as much as I am.