let's see how this one turns out to be.....
Auuuuutttthhhhhooooooor more chapters release mass chapter for advance Christmas Gift
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The book is really nice I like how the events follow each other .it's really interesting good work to the author,you are doing well.waiting to see how the book will progress
Title: A Gripping Tale of Loyalty, Love, and BetrayalRating: 5/5 starsReview:"Ivy Khalid's world is one of darkness, deceit, and blood ties, where loyalty is a luxury few can afford. Yet, amidst the treacherous landscape of the mafia underworld, she finds herself drawn to Anthony, a mysterious newcomer with secrets of his own.As their bond deepens, the lines between loyalty, love, and betrayal blur, and I found myself entangled in a web of intrigue, suspense, and forbidden love. The author masterfully weaves a tale of high stakes, where the price of loyalty is often paid in blood.Ivy's character is a force to be reckoned with - ruthless, beautiful, and calculating, yet vulnerable and relatable. Anthony's enigmatic presence only adds to the allure, as their relationship becomes a dangerous game of cat and mouse.The writing is engaging, with a perfect balance of action, dialogue, and description. The world-building is immersive, drawing you into the dark underworld of the mafia.This book is a must-read for fans of fantasy, adventure, and political intrigue. Be prepared for a thrilling ride filled with twists, turns, and heart-stopping moments. I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds for Ivy and Anthony!"
It's really a great story. I would love to know further!!! the story is quite interesting while reading. Good works Author.My best regards to you?
After reading a few chapters of the book, I decided to put the book down. My main criticism is that the writing style feels slightly elementary. There are times when the past and present tenses are used right after each other in the same paragraph which takes away from the story’s emersion. Also, I personally didnt like how the main character seems slightly one dimensional. I havent read far, but the character doesn’t seem to have any substance. However, I would still give the story a chance, because you may like it.
Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.
Is it a dropped author
Good story so far, character development slow but building nice and evenly, in my opinion, overall well done because i can see the scenes in my mind as i read them and i actually care what happens. Hope it continues.
would happily edit this on my time off. and that's really the only issue i see with this novel. great start, a so far intelligent mc, and street fighter!
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