This is really good work. And I really like the scenarios. The world-building is also great. The power system is also great I hope that dear author can keep up the work and release more chaps. I recommend that everyone read it.
When I was reading this I kept feeling something was missing, and only until I reached the chapter where he talked to the general I realized what that was. I don't know our Mc, and I don't mean his backstory, I mean I don't know why he acts like he acts, I don't know why he does A instead of B, and he does so just cause. His evolution options seem absolutely nonsensical to me, because it's never established what type of person he is. And if the lens through which we see your world are dull then the world will inevitably be as dull as a well.
A very intriguing story line, it truly stands out in the current era of novels,can't wait to see how the story pans out .Also grifter is my favorite character.
Legendary Armament Canon is a story about Zhou Shu, a transmigrator. Upon transmigrating, the main character finds out he is a young blacksmith apprentice (slave) who died of overworking. He uses his system to get out of his precarious predicament and to get stronger in a world where the strong rule the weak.I enjoy the idea of this novel quite a bit. I found this novel when looking for blacksmithing novels in general, and I found the idea of creating weapons and getting stronger when someone uses said weapon to kill interesting. However, I can't help but feel like the story shifted into nonsense at some point.The translation quality okay, there's nothing good or bad about it. It's better than most, and there's no obvious mistakes. (4/5 stars)The story development ties in closely to the main character's horrid personality, but I'll get to that later. The main character, Zhou Shu, works as a blacksmith apprentice, which is basically a slave. They don't get paid enough to live, and three generation's of his family have died due to overworking. The main character uses his system to forge new weapons. This backfires on him, and he is now forced to teach other people how to make a complicated weapon. After barely completing this, he is promoted to a slightly-more-valuable slave. He then invents even more weapons, and the government, upon realizing he is a genius who will probably become a full-on blacksmith, promotes him to a administrative position? They then force him to hire a bunch of people to complete a nigh-impossible order of weapons. He has arguably downgraded from the start of the novel. The only action in this novel is essentially the main character meddling in other people's battles, and getting attacked randomly by assassins. Main character is carried by the fact he gets overpowered abilities. Aside from that, the plot is the generic xianxia hidden identity overpowered main character, with a healthy dose of random misunderstandings. Very similar to "Zero to Hero in the Martial Arts Library" in this sense. (2/5 stars)Character design is downright horrid. All the characters in this novel are one dimensional, and unlike most humans, do not have a logical thought process. Not to mention, the main character can only be described as a pushover. He is constantly hounded to do nigh-impossible task over and over again, and this never really changes. He barely has any complaints, and he is hardly using his system to his advantage. Majority of characters are unlikeable, this novel makes every character exceedingly stupid so whenever the main character shows average intellect he is shown as a genius. (1/5 stars)World background is average. The novel is hardly descriptive, and I don't think they even said the names of other countries. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars)Overall, an interesting idea but very poor execution. Author didn't put ANY effort into the characters, and the plot was sub-par as well. This is a typical cookie-cutter overpowered xianxia main character novel.
I have really enjoyed this novel thus far and have fallen in love with the characters and the power scaling thus far. I know there have been people who don't like the way some things were portrayed or how story was progress in certain ways, but as an author myself who was struggling and trying to advance my writing ability I really like what has bee done so far. Personally I can't wait for the new version of this book. Author please take your time to love what you write and that it's true to what you wanted. I promise you that in the end you won't regret it and people will love your book as much as I fo if not more.
Another book from my favourite author! Here is what to expect : 1) The book is just a rollercoaster of funny . Some chapters are more funny , some chapters are less funny , BUT ALL CHAPTERS are funny !! 2) Ducks! Lots of ducks! and even more ducks! 3) Absolutely legendary dialogues and face slapping. 4) Impeccable grammar and writing quality! The story flows smoother than butter. 5) Whatt?? u want more? Go read now lurker !
Good novel for haremman. Go on...........
This story has a smooth progression and draw me in immediately. Characters development is placed well and no gaps in the storyline so far... I would love to read more of the novel, please update
Super Generic, i don't know why people vote this
I would like to start with a thank you, the novel is great it has a nice and exciting beginning which I found really interesting. There is something about the novel that keeps me always asking for more, I'm not sure if it the undead thing or the fact that a can imagine the MC getting at the driver and the "bodybuilder" but I really from the bottom of my heart think that this novel could go places . I'm intrigued to see were it'll take me .
Keep up the great work .
Love it so far can’t Wait for more————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Legit my favorite novel on this site, but the translator has just randomly disappeared with absolutely 0 communication or warning. Went from consistent daily updates to being dead for 2 months.
I'd legit be giving this novel a full 5 stars otherwise.