The first 5 chapters is a huge info dump, but none of it is info you need nor wanted. On the parts where you need info there is not any. I recommend reading over what you wrote becuase there are a lot grammer and spelling mistakes. You should also consider writing from a point of view that it is happening to you Instead of saying then Whoever told us this. Use more quotes instead of saying someone said do this. There are many plot holes as well so consider filling those in. There are so many things wrong with the quality of writing that I assume you know of. The power system is not very good either. The story itself and the idea behind It is good, but the story is very poorly written. I do not know the update schedule so i just put four for it. The quality of the book drops immensely the more I read. If you can rewrite the Chapters and improve your grammer I believe this could be a great book, but it is not for now.
I hope you update soon. I really want to know how this story ends
Who else is here because of Grandmist_Sage?
So, release rate? . . . .
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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this.The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily.The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel!Thank you author for the job well done.Try my novel#Rise of Evil Sword Godtag;- R-18,harem,action,romance, Xianxia