haven't read it yet but im leaving this here.also author pls put a synopsis
Monster angle argg.
Leo, who has been deeply engrossed in the scene before him, felt a hand pull him. Looking back, Leo was astounded because the person who had contacted him was none other that the said "man" having the time of his life before him with the "lady of his dreams" (A/N: Literally, she is).
i personally don't like it but that doesn't mean you shouldn't try it, I feel like everything felt a little too generic and it's really not just one thing, a lot of the decisions (pointed out in the paragraph comments by a few people) are just super generic and cliche, also the Ki/Mana in the world the author has made is called Ora and it just doesn't slide off the tongue well which was kinda awkward for me aswell. but it's pretty good you should check it out if you have spare timeps. I only got 10 or so chapters in and supposedly it gets better later so yeah you should probably read a bit longer than i did
I am really enjoying this novel. I like the story and the world building is pretty good. The MC is not so overpowered that it's not just him mowing through opponents. He has his ups and downs that make the story more engaging. Keep up the good work author
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DISGUSTING________________________________________________________________________________________________________Cover sucks change it- looks like a kidd leaving from his kindergarden.. make it like he is hoping for something- a a little dark one with one light...
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