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"Then, are you going to make that party again?"
Gardner, John. The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers. New York: Vintage, 1991.
600 pagi
" that something a man should be doing, it's okay. but who is she?"
Hey. Yes, you, who else would I be talking to?Now, this book here has great potential. I'm talking real greatness, like you-think-you-definitely-aced-an-exam greatness.The MC is a eccentric, young man that you'd find that you can relate to. He has no OP weapons yet, that allow him to triumph over any enemy, all he has is his good talent in magic, and mastery in alchemy... and a trashy looking robe, but actually good robe, and a magic space ring aka, INVENTORY. No real OP buff stuff.Add this book to the library. Thank me later, like you thank the deities for allowing you to ace that same exam... maybe even get a gf, or bf....(hahah..ha..ha.. maybe not a gf or bf... heavens knows many people have tried)Yes. This book does have alchemy. Not like other books, who don't have alchemy as their forte. This is a blend of mage craft and alchemy, neither one above the other. It's balanced.As for world building, it's unique. Akin to fresh air in Qidian.... No sign of harem, or of romance, just a girl who developed a school crush, but gave a gift to MC, so she won't be appearing any longer... hopefully.Please give it a try. It's a good read without any drama... yet.Note, when this review*ahem, reader thoughts* was created, there was only 12 chapters out. Milord will take it's leave now.
Shock, confusion, despair – they welled within her, overflowing, clouding her vision and staining her cheeks.
Agi: 0.1
"I know that, peach." A soft kiss on the side of his head. "Are you having fun?"
- Deadman
Once this strength is shown, the key will reveal itself on its own accord to that who is worthy.
What would you like to take out / put in ?