It has a cool premise, but the writing is not very good. The story also struggles to make the characters feel alive instead it feels like a story idea written by an AI.
I haven't read it yet, but i can't just give it a low rating. i just want to know if there is romance and how much it is
I like the pace of the story and your writing technique.It's also easy to visualize what happening with the story so kudos.Last but not the least, I admire how you can update 5 chps a week lol. I could never ?
It goes to a good place this book that I can see without forcing my eyes. I believe with time and more chapters. It would better and more fleshed out.
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Finally some mc that have brain who will train first hidden so he can be strong when facing the enemy not like other mc that will every to become what is the use of their op technique Finally some mc that have brain who will train first hidden so he can be strong when facing the enemy not like other mc that will every to become what is the use of their op technique
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Trash and everyone's fking annoying and idiotic idk why these bots are spamming 5 stars and those annoying side characters flattering and commenting and then u know what i mean
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after chapter 20 it's just young master bullshit cliches and the MC collecting women who's only notable quality is their body. waste of time
Well written plot and well developed storyline....MC as well as side characters are developing at good pace.... Could have stock a good amount of chapters first and released them frequently for the first month.... Should focus more on MC... Already many side characters, should introduce less....A little suggestion, want to make the chapter big, make the MC able to see others stats like hi