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I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it
U've probably had that on ur mind for some time now just had to let it out
loved the story line, very interesting. Though would have loved more about Joan and Cole's life after marriage, less on Chris and Olivia
Great book
absolutely love your books.... can't wait for the new one!!!!
I just rewarded you with gems ...
Great so far!
Cont from last comment. I think the book has great potential but the style of the writing needs to be cleaned up a lot to make it more flowing and easier to read.
I hope you enjoy
the new chapters 88 & 89 are the same as chapter 76, think the author needs to check on this
So addictive! Want to read more! ❤️
It's a great, interesting story. Love the way hoe the writer brings it. Can't wait for more chapters.
