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Some parts are a bit chaotic and confusing. I also think the flow is too quick and the story needs more descriptions.However,the idea has potential.
Keep it up!
There is a lot or rage and courting death in so few chapters!!!!
Are there any more Choices System like this and Top tier Providence??
Can anyone list them…
First review from the author.
Story development and world background: A story involving many myths and legends, including Vampires, Werewolves and much more. The story is about a boy's journey in a world of legends while occupying the body of one of the Four Ancestral Vampires. The story revolves around Atlas and his quest to reclaim what he had lost. A journey which brings him at the forefront of the legends he only used to hear about. The story will have mystery, action, adventure and much more to keep you engaged and waiting for the next chapters.
Character: Atlas used to be an ordinary boy who had smartness but lacked the strrength and the courage. With the sudden change in his life, he walks in a journey to reinvent himself.
Update Stability: Daily release.
Please give the book a try and see for yourself.
I've read quite a bit. Far enough to get a grasp on the book, and I have to say, it's very good. I'm a big fan of sci-fi works, so iI' already biased to this. That said, the book has several grammatical errors, although they're passable. It's a good read overall, and I would like to see more. [img=recommend]
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This is fresh and that's the first compliment I will like to put out there. We have read about prince, princess, vampires, kingdoms, superhumans and the list go on, there aren't much novels here that shows us a realist approach in a common person's life. I could connect with the MC Andrew and how his life has been all about making his mom happy, which to be hones is not a bad thing but in the pursuit of his mom's happiness he somewhere lost the meaning of happiness and fulfilment in his own life, The story is very well written. And I liked the characters and the conversations they have between them. I liked the story and I will be willing to read more of this, so please keep up us updated with new chapters. And Keep up the good work Author :)
hey, did you notice that? what? ah, little thing you see - when i read this novel i didnt see any plot. maybe it was lost between that timeskips? who knows.
MC spends way too much time ranting about how untrustworthy women are and how great it is to be single. The story is also uninteresting in general. Finally, to all the confused reviewers from a month ago: MC inherits the money. He chose not to inherit in the original timeline, but has decided to do so this time around, and is now waiting for his stepfather to die.
the best from this batch I have read so far ????????????????????????????????????????????????
It's pretty good so far (20 chapters) and although it is kinda like a l replica of big shot it's a bit different. Overall I think it will be a good read as long as the translation continues to translate well and as long as the chapters are consistent
