Set in alternate world which to me is stupid. Dialogue is difficult to read I dropped at 3rd chapter. MC says he told his family what happens then few paragraphs later he says he starts telling them what happens. Keep writing author you will get better
An infant, at the end of the world is teleported to a planet and found by an alien. She keeps him and ten years later , he looses him...good concept.
I think this is a very powerful story line. I'm blown by the detail of what seems to be her experience transitioning it's almost like I was there with her. Great work. Would love to see more. <3
Good writing, interesting story. I like it a lot so far, I recommand it to everybody ! The fact that the chapters are long don't leave you with the insatisfying feeling that I usually have with new novels.I think it's a really original work and the author seems good !Added to library !
This novel is barely in the reading to pass time zone.The problem is that the world building and the mechanics of the magic system aren't defined in a consistent way. Which leads to the MC being awesome, but not comparable to anything.If one can reach a rank with enough training, why does the difference between spells matter so much? Why is it important to condese magic power? The author simply tells us it is and we as the readers have to accept it.An example is the fact that the MC always practices only the basics of magic and so far only one element. Why? Why are the basics so important? I understand that the basics can strengthen the foundation and this is important, but even the most patient and wise humans on the planet know that advanced techniques are important in any field, that is why they were developed.It feels like the only reason the MC practices at all is to get the system rewards, which is what actually gives him strength.It is like he goes to work every day for money, he doesn't gain anything during practice, he just gets rewarded for doing so.MC is also way to passive and mostly a nonentity in this story. We could literally exchange him for any other student and nothing would change.
great story with an amazing cliff hanger at the end. no major issues just a couple of occasions when either the characters gender or name would be a wrong
from what I read so far your doing really good my personal preference would be the Mc focuses on agility and knives but it I am looking forward to how he will evolve and develop his future sight and powers
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it's really good compared to your other novel. u have really improved author. space space space space space space space space space space space
-different world connected to earth-god and goddess, demon emperor-turn back to time-the main character is having a journey to enjoy different woman in pleasure
Okay. This is a pretty good one! I love Ku Lo and how he assesses the situations before him. Rin Tin Tin... She's a bit crazy isn't she. Anyway, the writing is pretty good. I like the dialogues as well. I'm the kind who gives more value to the dialogues at times, so I was pretty satisfied by this. Overall, it's a pretty great novel! Recommend it!
Everything is good and I enjoyed every turn of the story... The only thing that is bothering me is..... although this would make me look bad, and also needy, and a (little bit?) Perfectionist.... correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the right spelling for "Devine" actually "Divine".....Really I don't mean to be offensive or perfectionistic, I just thought you should edit it since its always been being mentioned every time you talks about cores....But all in all... I really enjoys the story... keep it up and please don't drop it....