Hey! I just started reading your novel and it's amazing. Usually, stories in which the male lead is depressed are very few. Also, character design is good. Keep it up.??
I don't mind reading a novel that is written by someone whose english isn't the best. I don't mind a translation that is overly literal if the story is good. But this...piece of work is so badly translated that it makes some MTL look good. I can just barely follow what is going on in the barest of senses and much of the meaning is lost. Might be a good story but no way I am going to read more of this garbage to find out.
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Probably one of the best you can find for these "Global/Worldwide" transmigration stuff, it's overall not bad although mc a lil op compared to his race.Anyway here's a recipe for cake:6 tablespoons unsalted butter, plus more for greasing the pan2 cups all-purpose flour, plus more for dusting the pan2 teaspoons baking powder2 teaspoons baking soda1 teaspoon kosher salt2 cups sugar2 cups water4 ounces unsweetened chocolate, chopped1 teaspoon pure vanilla extract2 eggs, lightly beatenChocolate Frosting
The novel starts off quite interesting. As is typical with the trend of transmigration stories, MC doesn't think twice about being teleported to another world- that's completely ok, actually. His transmigration and his immediate assimilation into the world can be excused, despite the fact that he came from a world of familiar smartphones and not a world with a jumbled mix of advanced "ring" systems, ancient relics, and wacky monsters.That one point. That is excusable. However, much like credit card debt, you cannot declare bankruptcy the second time.It would appear as though the author definitively planned out the first 20 or so chapters of the story- it feels pretty realistic, and the MC's wits show through in a manner that engages the reader, despite his crippling handicap. Ever present in the background was his impending death, as his lifespan was essentially crippled to around 3 months.Then, the warning signs begin to show.His cheat skill, a sort of system, activates and immediately catapults him to importance by granting him the ability to summon monsters he kills, which the translator terms "Imperial Censure". There is no explanation on how this role fits into society, simply that the role is "exclusive" and represents "high status".What else does it do? Allow him to copy skills, for one. Instantly, MC is a comprehension genius. The author's lazy writing starts to show through here, around the assessment arc.MC enters desert. Desert has sand monsters. Fight sand monster, summon sand monster. Mutated?! Joy! The above is literally how the world building in this novel works. Author throws out a random location, describes it with a line or two, and then focuses back on MC.This could be remedied if the MC was adequately fleshed out, but that doesn't occur, either. The whole reason the MC is joining the assessment is because his system would've deserted him otherwise, because apparently the transmigration, monster, and OP system tropes weren't enough- the author needs a quest aspect as well.What else happens? MC meets possibly the most overpowered character in the entire story (literally a surviving half god) and his blood somehow managed to revive her. Then, she instantly heals his crippled lifespan. He subsequently proceeds to learn an Epic skill from watching her brew tea. Afterwards, he returns to the assessment like nothing happened.Yeah. However, I digress. Overall, the author attempts to demonstrate the MC's prowess at the expense of world building and other characters. Bai Yan, the main antagonist, was initially portrayed as aloof- he stated he wouldn't kill the MC because the MC was week. Flash forward 2 days and Bai Yan now picks fights whenever MC says anything. In public. What?MC apparently is the only one with brains as well. With an impending monster horde, there's no way for everyone to escape. What should they do?MC suggests rather plainly that they could group up and fight- author throws in some random locations to make MC seem smarter, and everyone reacts as if MC is a genius. He's really not. Even his power is borrowed. And what he does have came from plot armor. He's essentially a vessel that is given "personality" by the secret seeds of wish fulfillment within our hearts- nothing more. If you value world building and character development, don't read this. If you're willing to turn off your brain and become one of the numerous other side characters that fawn over the MC, then I guess you could give it a shot. *Translation and editing are both really basic. I do not profess to be competely adept at grammar, but as a native, the choppy sentences are quite numerous. Additionally, the word choice is extremely bland and basic. On the flip side, I guess there's at least a semblance of uniformity across the mundane story, cardboard MC, and uninteresting descriptions. I hope the irony of this praise is not lost to you.
Wow, amazing story
a very captivating and interesting love story...
I wish the updates could go faster. this story is so good
I regret spending for this book! Before it used to be great now i think the author runs out or lacks ideas. James is always doing the same thing! After being rescued by a woman James repays then the idea of marrying this women is always suggested to help James with his problems! Come on author!!!
best book i have read..........
I continuously check in for 654 days. I have read so many novels, but this novel \\" I'm a quadrillionaire\\" I loved the most. And for those who feel boring, delete this book, who force u to read it without ur knowledge? so annoying...
I like the book but we really need to get to the point and end it.