Potaty
This is a good story with a good plot mc level progress is a little bit fast but that's understandable since he is op in this world so far everything is good I enjoy reading this story.
I read 150 chapters before finding myself thinking "why am i reading this?"
The MC is too overpowered. Everything is too easy for him, no effort whatsoever. It's supposed to be a game but that thing is broken because the MC has an unfair advantage. Maybe it's like Cultivation online and Cultivation is real irl but still. It gets old quick.
Characters are bland. We know nothing about them. MC has 3 roommates and aside from "he logged out and went to eat with his roommates" we never see them. No talk about their lives, their game characters, nothing.
Author spend more time describing his cultivation system than writing a real story. The game has no quests, you just cultivate non stop. You don't know the structure of the world. You get the names of the MC's city and of the country but that's it. Population? Sects? What's around? We don't know.
I don't know where the author wants to go because nothing actually happens. As for other players? I have no proof they exist because MC never saw one. Weird because everyone play the game.
I started reading this thinking it would be an okay read to pass time because off the generic name and interesting synopsis, but man... was I wrong
The story really reeled me in from the first chapter with how fun Will's death letter was and his interactions with the Gods.
The pacing was just right for me and I felt the story never progressed too slow. Even the weird little interactions between character that might not be important at all don't feel unnecessary.
I can definitely day this story has one of the best Character Development across the app as we see Will grow from a small goat milk loving baby to a goat milk loving young adult.
The harem and romance was done amazingly as well. The interactions between Will and his lovers ( even before they get into relationships ) don't feel forced and the transitions from friends to lovers actually feel fairly real. The Link between the current and past lives is just the overwhelming good topping on an amazing cake.
And finally, the World Building... This was probably my favourite, even though though I barely have any knowledge about most mythologies, I can't help but get invested into Hestia, the different classes, the Gods and how the foreshadowing of the different crisis looming over Hestia and Will.
Overall, an Amazing book that's worth the coins and fast passes and an Author that clearly has passion and put his blood, sweat and tears in his work.
Hope to be able to see this Story to the end.
Best Luck Author, Thank You for this Amazing work of Art. :)
Author deletes reviews that are under 4 stars so this is 5 star in suckiness.
Congratulation for the writer. There are grammatical errors in the first few sentences...
Não foi do meu agrado, mas talvez você que está lendo isso, possa gostar da história. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Of writing this I'm at chapter 110 so far I'm enjoying the series but there's a few problems with the book. For starters is it's hard to tell if they really playing a game, people don't say the right things and finally their isn't a base of the game to give us a idea what is and what isn't capable
Without a doubt one of the jewels from this round of trial picks. Very good translatIon standard so far and the story isnt so fast that this will be a dead novel in 200 chapters. I don’t even mind the mild chinese propaganda. Worth your time without a doubt.
only read about 24 chapters so far as of this review but idk man I've thought about dropping this story a few times now, story itself is pretty good, nothing too amazing but a good read with deferent pacing.
My real problem with it is that yes it has the stupid obvious plot armor that we all have come to expect from the novels on this site but what's really getting to me is that not only does author introduce language specific terms from a handful of languages like chaebol (Korean) and nii (Japanese) among a few others, grammar is just as all over the place. wish author would just stick to one or two languages and focus on Grammer, I'm gonna be surprised if I make it to ch.100 lol
My advice to author really is to reduce the amount of languages and focus on Grammer
I am just here for the culture, every other thing kills my brain cells......................................................................
i gave a 5 stars okay? so dont drop it......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Really liked it. Its usually hard to find novels like this and its even harder to put down after finding one. Anyways, eagerly awaiting for new chapters.
