Amazing read , highly recommend , the world building and the character development, altogether , are amazing, all fantasy fans should pick this up
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I like the authors novels as attention is paid to details and a thrilling story that keeps you engaged is always there to be enjoyed. Not used to novels (gacha system) like this, but am enjoying reading something new.
I should have probably put this as a review for the author's other novel, but since it's been dropped now (rip) I thought it better to multitask and try to promote this new novel somewhat.Anyway, it's good so far. I love how you seriously seem to have taken feedback from your first work and improved your writing; it is much more sleek and nice to read, the story seems to know where it's going, and while the book is far from perfect, I've enjoyed binge-reading it the past day (although do note this could mean i am writing this with some recency bias).Now, why the low(ish) ratings? Well, because I think it's better if I'm fair and actually give feedback as opposed to slapping 5 stars on everything, and giving lower ratings allows easier comparison to see how I actually think the different aspects of the story stack up against each other. Writing quality is 4 stars, so good there. My loose criteria for 5 stars is to impress me in some way. Either teach me a new word, consistently use vivid descriptions, use a couple of semi colons etc. Story development is 3 stars because first of all, it's still early, and secondly, while executed pretty well the story isn't super original so far - not that it has to be in order to be good. Same sort of thing for character design. Average, sometimes unrealistic characters, with no impressive or difficult to portray personalities so far. Updating stability got a 4 because it's still early and as a criterion for a review it makes little sense. World background is 3 cause it's decent so far, but again the story is in its nascent stages, and a bit derived. Show me something new. Doesn't have to be crazy. Even something that isn't new, but not normally seen in this genre; that's how i give a good score for world background.Of course if you have any questions at all or want any more feedback/further explanation (and that goes for others reading this as well as the author) I'd be happy to answer. Good luck, I'm enjoying so far
Nice work author keep up with the good works!!
It is good after all. Quite enjoy reading it. Eventhough quite confusing at first, just read it.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
First time I will read a book by this spectacular author Glimmy I have read only read half of her two books of her but this time I will go all in Waiting to dive in Violet’s world with her four alphas in new darker version werewolf stories
Author here, shamelessly giving my self a review cause why not ? it's not complete yet but the ride is amazing,i hope
I find it quite complicated so I decided to drop this novel. In this novel FL doesn't even know ML and she got pregnant and there is 5 years of separation which quite irritate me.
Wonderful work you are doing here. I love how the story is paced and the MCs character. Thank you for being consistent in posting the chapters. Keep up the good work, and I wish you all the best on this journey. You have my support.
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