Hey fool, you are missing chapters, have mixed up chapters and aren’t listening to us or anybody. This has made the story confusing and mixed up. Now fix it, because I have complained to the site already. Good day not so smart one.
Yeah a sports novel! I liked the first chapters. The system seams a bit boring at the moment, but I'm sure that it will be expandet with new functions and stuff.
This ongoing WebNovel is a must-read for anyone who loves a good story. The author's writing style is so engaging and the world they've created is so immersive that I'm constantly captivated by the story. The characters are so well-developed that I feel like I know them personally, and the ongoing nature of the story only adds to the excitement and anticipation. I highly recommend this WebNovel!
author is stupid, mc is stupid. the story is as inconsistent as the mc with his goals. too many unnecessary plot and plotholes. author forces mc to look cool but not quite making it right.
I almost didn't start reading this novel because of all the negative comments about the quality of the translations. I'm glad I started though. In my opinion there are some spelling errors, typing errors and grammar mistakes at times but it's nowhere as bad as all the comments indicate. Well, let me put it this way: the quality of translation absolutely does NOT affect my joy of reading, I get so engaged in the story that I don't even make note of the mistakes oftentimes. I don't know if the earlier chapters later on had been fixed and updated but what I can tell you now, that if you are interested in the plot, go ahead and read it, it is really a good read. So, thank you translators for your hard work. Also, please increase chapter upload per week, because I'm about to catch up and worried that because of the long wait, I'll loose interest in this novel in future, like so it happened with a few others.
1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. Follow me for exp ;)
16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
An amazing novel with great potential. The author is doing a very good job and I hope he doesn’t drop it. A must read for sure.
This is literally the most unresponsive translator. Goes weeks without updates or translations after promising new chapters... even lied that another translator was brought on board, but yet no chapters for a week. The story is legit good, that's why I'm even writing a review.
I haven’ read that far but the kid is crippled it doesn’ t fix when he goes into vr he gets trampled on the story is not going good
I'm not usually a fan of game-themed, stories, but...
At first, I thought that Hiro (the MC) was an annoying entitled brat, but I found that's not the case. Rather, after I noticed why he was like that in the beginning, I sympathized with him a little.
Futher into the story, I actually found Hiro to be rather cool and lovable at the same time. It feels weird to use those two different words to describe one person, but that's just how it is. Thank everything holy the MC doesn't have a 1D personality.
The story development is solid. Not too fast, but not too slow and dragged out either. The world background is built at a nice pace instead of just thrown at the readers with a bunch of info dump, which is something I really appreciate.
All in all, a fun read to pass time! If you're looking for a fun, light read, try this story out!
Basically he has a game like system to help power him up. This world is connected to another that spawns demons and makes origin power which allows some people to develop classes. While he is a from this world there is no real background given yet. He seems like a slightly smart typical young man and his first class is sword saint ( Uber class but not the highest). With his cheat he can do draws using his lifespan 1 yr = 1draw like a mobile game. He can absorb life from Demons.
This story has a very good potential. I`m adding this into my library. I hope you will release more chapters. Good luck.....................