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Slave systems are Just indication of authors dont know how to make a proper mc for the fic. I am very dissapointed. The ida was good but execution was one of the worse
Keep in mind that I just gave up at around chapter 40. I will try to explain my ratingsI am ok with the different buildings as long as there is a comparison. And I am sure alot are alright with it. I usually just dismiss those as fantasy buildings when the info dumps comes in and finally, since I am a filipino, am alright once there are no info dumps.The reason as to why I rated it 4 is the over explaining things. Like memory and even a katana; the katana was even described with different words, 5 of them in fact. The info dumps are too much. It is nice to have info dumps but there is just too many. In the whole 40 chapters, it felt like more than half of those chapters are info dumps, unnecessary infodumps even. The main character is fine up until his attitude turned 180. The character is good and is not provoked easily, later on he saved a group of people then after that he found another group of people. Those guys just warned him not to go there, there was no reason for conflict but then the main character fights the group cause he didn't like what he said ?. He is pretty generic to me so I wanted it at 4 but that attitude change reminded me of the other powerfantasy novels with horrible plot like space martial god. Which really just soured my experience so this review might be a little lower than like a -0.1 in ratings than the one I had in mind.The world is explained in an annoying way. Could have kept some mystery but decided to just push many of it's secret out. Other than that not that bad so 3. I could have made it 4 or 5 but those info dumps destroyed the atmostsphere of the world for me.Overall rating is 3.7 for me but due to my biased judgement. -0.1 which makes it 3.6. Maybe it gets better but I just don't have the patience to read novels like these anymore.
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Overall I'll say it's a really good book, top notch characters, uhhhhh, not so shabby character design, and piece of the art world building,dan howbeit quite similar to most protagonist is one of the few main characters that actually seeks vengeance but doesn't let go of basic morality, illara isn't a pushover and actually stands out unlike most female leads, and sai isn't the dumn jock boyfriend, all in all I think it's a great story.??
To be honest, I didn't have the highest expectations when I was reading this. Turns out, personally I find that reading this is way more enjoyable than most post apocalyptic scenarios I've read.The MC is naturally a overpowered killing machine from the start of the story, he meets new people throughout but right now I barely see much development of the characters as we progress. The most I see is their basic backstories of why they are here or "Oh no! How will we survive? We can't let MC carry us, etc" I hope that as I get further into the story we would further expand on backgrounds of characters and their past lives.Another thing to mention is the writing quality, some sentences are badly written missing proper grammar (Barely Readable, hope you fix it or find a editor lol), with the cliche enemy rises because MC didn't finish him off and he becomes stronger trope (but at least he is strong enough to pull off situations and look bad ass,). If you can ignore these aspects of this novel and looking for a new zombie type of novel definitely try it out.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 17.27millionRating : 9.2(608)Chapters : 306Rank : 28Status : ongoingWord count : 640thousandauthor level : lv4No of works : 1Comments : 10572Year started : 2018Currently very popular in china right nowguys I started writing a novel. If you have time please do check it out. Name is 'love me again' . And of course I'm gonna write this on every novel's stats, I'd be dumb to not utilize the golden opportunity.
Hmmmm interesting concept , lots of mystique Real life lessons are interwoven in the story , totally love that But Jury is still out ,so come on try it with me and see how the story turns out to be
writing quality is good with good grammar and proper story writing. Good enough to keep readers retain the story.The story development is really good with how you wrote only the necessary details and kept readers engaged with the story. I like how the story is simple and you didn't info dump it. You are really an experienced and proper author.The character design needs some work. I mean how people hate him because he is just poor kid.And is Silvia a feminist. because readers assume things when you don't represent them. I know you want to make things suspensive but just bragging about beauty isn't how you should introduce characters.Other than that the story is very good. The updating stability is good.And world building is just good until now. As it completed in the future
Ignore every other review about this. The book is great. Chapters are top-quality, translation is on-Point. Every chapter costs 13-20 ss because it's so long but if you hoe enough you won't realize how the day goes by. Took me 11 hours to get to the last chapter in a crazy Sunday binge read. It's just that good. Ignore the hate comments, they'll stop at around chapter 140. It's one of the best stories, absolutely no loophole, whenever you feel like author-him did an oopsie2, it'll be explained in the next 1-4 chapters. Try the story. Give it a chance. It'll be worth the read :)
Awww baby girl this is nice
It's interesting...I can't wait to read more...
