VoIkmer
This is definitely a good novel and I greatly enjoyed the adventure and evolution through the whole book.
The only regret I have is the bad ending, I mean seriously, this is one of the worse ending I have ever read and seen...
However, at least it has an ending.. So there is at least that....
What truly amaze this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, always giving me some curiosity for the flow of story. You did a great work, Thor[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I've read a few chapters and it's very interesting. This is my first time reading such a novel I mean cole gets to leave his novel.
Thumbs up to the author, nice one.
o conceito é muito bom. espero que não pare de postar.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like the mind twist when that fantasy setting turns into a sci-fi setting.
I also like that the author has clearly put in effort into researching sci fi themes and terms and has flavoured his work with it, granting a more robust sci-fi feel. Thumbs up!
An interesting take and start. I will admit the story takes some unexpected turns. Now , at the beginning, the words seem to need some fixing in their placement. It was difficult to understand who was speaking in that instant, but other than those mistakes, it's worth checking out.
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Who ever was translating this, please try to continue translation on your own website as Webnovel abandoned it.
This novel has potential to be better than IRAS in almost every aspect, except in Comedy.
Hope translator continues translation of this novel.
Ch19 - It's slow and feels super dry
MC - I want to relate to this guy.....working a shitty job with an education background that could have got him something better, whilst surrounded by shitty colleagues but the Author just makes him come off like I'm meant to despise him.
MC background - Has parents in the village, Has two Uni degrees, doesn't know martial arts - Yet author will always remind you of his degrees and tell you that he knew how to fight and he doesn't carry a umbrella cos he's a real MAN.
World background - Gym, gym, gym gym, dorm and a abandoned factory.
Side characters - His best friend has the most depth, Id like to see a story on him and his messed up relationship with his wife.
welp this is the current best for the new releases dunno just try it thier both cliche and mediocre but choose one from the lesser evil i guess
Really felt like I wasted my time reading this novel. It was pretty decent in the earlier stages, but continued to go downhill until it got worse, only for us to be given that horrendous ending. I initially picked this up because I saw it was complete with no many chapters, but it was such a let down to see the reasoning behind why this novel came to an ending so soon. Sure we got a summary at the end there, but that only left me more unfulfilled and disappointed because it felt like no effort was put into it. So much wasted potential.
After reading 300 chapters, I think this novel is okay. I do not believe it deserves 4.9 stars but like 4.2 stars. Maybe its because I don't know the full story yet but I just don't think its worthy of a 4.9. Maybe the main characters aren't too my preferences.
