Obligatory author review: This novel is centered around creating a fantasy world. It's going to be a lighthearted fantasy story with some interesting developments. Some inspirations include Nebula's civilization and the Civilization game series. I've been working on it for a while, so I hope you enjoy it! If you have any questions, feel free to leave a comment!
Nice novel, it's not very exciting but the world building is really bad, why the hell start from the bottom? The main character and the secondary characters remain mortal humans for so long that I got bored, the author focuses on the characters and building the family much more than the traditional plots and lore of the farming world, it's like a rural family of idiots.
fantastic writing, well planned and executed.
I came here to cry, and the tears we're delivered! Cant wait for more!!!
good discovery, I'm really looking forward to it, please author don't drop it or turn it into rubbish please !!!! Otherwise for the others, go for it !!!
I really like it, I want to give it higher rating but it would be unfair since there only 1 chapter currently. Looking forward for the next chapter!
It's very interesting how you can choose the next chapter, you can read different stories in one novel and get to die many times only to come back again. I only wish it has more updates weekly.
First time writing, so I hope to improve more with the upcoming chapters though I promise you that this novel may not be perfect but it will be engaging. As the chapters progress it will just get better and better. So I hope you all will give me support in this journey through reviews, comments, collection and what not. For now have a great day everyone
I really enjoying this story and hoping more updates keep coming
good for the start I hope it will continue
Shameless author here, I have nothing much to say, ask any questions about my book and I'll answer them all!!!
I like the plot where they are in the loop but there's more mystery to it than that, and the cliffhangers, its a cherry on top.