The story seems nice with a uncommon system that I personally have not seen before. But unfortunately its a real pain to read due to bad editing and some grammar mistakes, Hopefully Author-san can get an editor to make it more smooth to read, until then thats the best I can say...
DONT DROP....DROPPING IS A "SIN". According to the Legendary (fake) Article 404Error: Translator / Author that drop novels is punishable by: WRITING FOR ETERNITY ...."Kekeke" *Evil laugh*
This is a good novel with good Plot Execution.The MC is Very aware with surrounding and a bit smart.
This is a nice fun read with a great sense of humor. Intriguing opening in third person narration with the team of Grimmers going about their business. Love the banter between the two siblings, some great comical stuff there. We then move on to meet our protagonist for the next few chapters and set up the story with first person narration, which is good because the protagonist sounds like a funny sort of character and his world views make for a lot of laughs. Storywise, I am certainly engrossed so far. And high marks are also in order from a technical standpoint as this story is very well written, adding further to the overall enjoyment factor. Five stars all the way. Hope the author keeps up the great work.
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it's a scp book that's good enough for me if that's a problem with you welp that's ok ( writing that because I run into a alot of hate) welp good day
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well , I'm really impressed by the first chapter , and the beginning was really awesome , and the story goes really interesting , and I'm really enjoying it! thank you so much for giving us a wonderful story!
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The author's description of the scenes were splendid!
It was a good read, I am instantly hooked in cahapter one!
As a fellow country men, I really know what the author tells.
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Posted by the editor, ErwinCloude.
Hello everyone.
I'd like to clarify some things as I've read a comment on chapter 1 in regards to a lack of logic and how some things don't make sense.
Firstly, this novel is created mainly from the author's, Novel Man, imagination and some input from myself here and there, meaning he will write things that he obviously likes and think people will enjoy in this novel. So don't expect everything to be completely logical or for everything to reflect reality. It's a fantasy novel after all, what's the point of reading fantasy if everything is exactly the same as in real life? Thus, we will make some things fantastical or different from what you'd normally expect.
Secondly, I feel like a distinction needs to be made between two types of logic, Universal Logic and Book Lore Logic. Mind you, these are terms I just thought up, so don't take them too seriously lol.
Universal Logic is, as the name implies, universal. Meaning it's unchanging and is naturally apparent to anyone reading a book. For example, as a certain someone once said, people die when they are killed :D or being caught lying is bad. These are natural things we've all seen or experienced ourselves enough, to know them to be true. So, they remain true in a fictional world as well..... in most cases lol.
Whereas Book Logic, is completely based upon the author's imagination, meaning it all relies upon the rules and laws decided by the creator of a fictional world. For instance, tamers holding a small world inside their dwelling which gives them cosmic powers.
So, when something strange happens, don't immediately assume it's bad, a plot hole or a slip up by the author. It can often times be based on the book's internal logic. The rules that enforce it are often made obvious in the beginning parts of a book, so a reader should judge the happenings of the story by those rules, assuming there's been enough time to set them all up. Sometimes, some of these rules are made purposefully vague with some hints here and there, for the purpose of cultivating a sense of mystery and intrigue for the reader. In which case, we hope the readers will be patient :D.
Although, obviously this book has only begun, so we hope the readers can be patient for now until most of the core rules are revealed as even we're only at the beginning of the story. Additionally, as we're new to this, we'll naturally make some mistakes here and there in the beginning, so we ask for readers to be understanding.
With all of that said, we hope you'll enjoy the journey of Akash and his friends. Please be kind in the comments and if you have any constructive criticism, express it in a clam and clear manner, so we can address it and learn from it. Thank you all for reading this :D.
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Its... alright. The book is good and the story is good. But it feels like reading those mangas that doesn't have any plot at all. Like Slice of Life mangas. The only plot that I've seen is the dungeons.
Its a fun read by yourself, but I guess I don't really see the appeal of vlogging. I'll still continue to read it and check it out in the future again.