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So far from what I've read it's seems to be a really good story and I feel it could go far. Keep up the great work and sending out chapters. Love you man
So my first impressions of this novel were actually pretty bad. Aside from the fact that it all reads like a first draft with zero editing, I was expecting an immensely cliche power fantasy. But, I will admit, the story has grown on me, and has actually surpassed my expectations. I've read all the way to the current chapter, 316, and am sad to be caught up, I was enjoying the binge read. A big reason why I am liking the story so far is it's somewhat slow paced. While the MC does belong to the OP category, the plot has made it so you really don't see that. He actually spends half the time struggling because he gets involved with things way above his level. Trust me, when I say the story just keeps getting better, and you get more invested in the characters as the story goes on. I strongly hope and advise the author keep putting in the effort to add more depth to the story, and especially characters. And certainly do not neglect the romance element. It has actually turned out very wholesome and I really like the few female lead characters introduced so far. Just avoid the terrible pitfall where they become damsels in distress who exist to rely on the MC and show no personality. That would be a disgrace to your writing.
The blatant power stone botting and lack of any sort of originality with this story is appalling. Its the standard copy-paste cheap novel that often gets translated from Chinese authors. I honestly dont understand why webnovel allows this garbage to ruin their site's reputation.
Well the premise is amazing and the story has a lot of potential unlike many other stories on this site the progression of the story is kinda slow but that's good in this case
by the way that part of the contract with the devil ends up going wrong later on and ends up becoming a very funny thing in chapter 128
No leas esto...todos son tontos en esta novela, voy a hacer un poco de spoiler, pero no te arrepentirás xD...solo vi 1 capitulo y todo esto es pura basura...Bueno la premisa es que el mc va a un mundo paralelo y se convierte en heredero de una empresa en quiebra, la profesión más respetada son los científicos...y ahí esta el problema, me plantean la premisa de que los científicos sólo saben crear armas, me dicen que los científicos pueden matarte si no le agradas, me dicen que comienzan una guerra por recursos, bueno en la guerra se dañan los recursos, me dicen que si un país daña un científico la organización destruirá todo el país....¿QUE? Si un científicos muere por accidente en el territorio de un país todo el las personas que están en el país mueren...y así dicen que falta recursos, me dicen que los países no tienen sus propios científicos, me dicen que los países o todo el mundo...no planearon buscar recursos fuera del planeta...digo si tan poderosos son los científicos no será difícil....en fin en esta novela los países no tienen control de nada, los científicos pueden hacer lo que quieran y no hacer nada, hay terroristas y organizaciones peligrosas y los países no hacen nada.
No recomiendo esta novela, si tienes perspicacia te darás cuenta en el primer capítulo que esa novela es horrible....
NO DIGO MÁS
this child is fking garbage....no fillal piety and arrogant to the nine heavens......cocky and thinks he is entitled to the workds wealth with a god complex and im just getting started
Yo, MC with System. Auto 5 Star
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this is an amazing novel..
I love how it just flows ...
excellent
ITS BACK FROM THE GRAVE WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Let’s goooo redemption of Webnovel.
loving it
This book is lovely! Fluffy and all...
Honestly, the way that they author express the characters it's incredible. Each one of them had their own uniqueness and their personalities are portrayed very well by his writing.
The story itself has a good pace, and it's enough to maintain the immersion without break the concentration.
Overall, I loved it, I recommend it and it should have more recognition.
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