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This story has a lot of potential and I really enjoy evil mc stories. Hope the author doesn’t drop
nice ?keep it up author you've successfully captured my soul ?
I give it a 5 star, good pacing and good character development. Have already added it to my library and will definitely be reading more as soon as new chapters drops
Great story with an interesting plot and a charismatic and easy-to-like protagonist. As always, the author never disappoints and always presents us with a story with a rich and interesting world, with complex and easy-to-like characters.
is this books dropped? i dont see a chapter for very long time.
the writer has developed the story perfectly ..
sword freak and smitting, please explore more of this...
I love the plot of the story, especially the Mc Tom and his invented AI Noor.Although the pace seems a bit slow, I still love how I get to feel what the MC is feeling as I read.It is a great read ?❤️
can someone pick this up, this series is really good and i want to see the story progressing
WRITING STYLE: The author’s writing style is impeccable and quite good. The story is well written, can be easily understood, and is not as confusing as the story goes. Although there may be negligible errors that I have seen, they haven't in any way distracted my attention and immersion in reading. STABILITY OF UPDATES: With the author's current update schedule (4 chapters per week), if the update rate goes up more, I'm sure its readers' anticipation will level up, too. As of now, I think the story is getting better after every chapter. I am just 11 chapters away from the latest chapter which I plan to go through. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The story's pacing, for me, has just the right momentum---not too fast or too slow. The author has taken great consideration in building up this story that it gets more engrossing to read and makes you look forward to the momentous progress of our main character in the story. CHARACTER DESIGN: We have an astute and strong-willed main character here in this story whose progress gets better and more promising in every chapter. Even the side characters being gradually introduced into the fray have their own distinctive roles. WORLD BACKGROUND: The world setting is so descriptively rendered based on the main character's interactions within the game world and with the other game characters, where their respective actions are taking place. This is the second book that I have read in this genre which I am enjoying so far; so keep it up, author. You are absolutely doing a great job.
