the story was good but before you get into this novel im at chap 61 and the story is done settling its premise since its slow read atleast were im at because it wont immediately hook you and the synopsis made me not want to read it but give it a try
Story is good so far, just that most sentences needs to be reworded or fixing, since some sentences doesn't really make sense. You dont know what they are talking about or it's like jibberish since your unsure what's going on.
My only question is if there will be a harem, I mean, he's a god, I think it's necessary. I add the other star if positive. I saw that in your previous novel there was a harem label.By the way, I have not read your previous novel because it seems that the main character was not dominated despite controlling destiny.
Nicely done although the story is slow in progress. Over all the story is good but I can day it's quite interesting to read. In my preference its just lacking a little bit in story telling. The jump in of scenes are one of those. But just a little.
I love strong female lead stories and I was searching for it for a while. now I found it and gonna enjoy it if the kind author update it regularly ??
Author here, finally decided to start and try making a novel and see how that goesThis is my first "book
Honestly would have loved it but I’m a 100% sure that the author is not Nigerian because they’re a lot of mispronunciations in the book and a lot of names are totally not aligning with the characters ?u200d♂️?u200d♂️But other than that which is totally my viewpoint since I’m Nigerian and igbo too specifically from Abia like the MC of the book....... The book is otherwise wonderful
A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
Até o momento, capítulo 9:Qualidade de escrita 5Estabilidade de atualização 5Desenvolvimento da história 4Design de personagem 4Fundo de mundo 3
Basically, this is what would “realistically” happen if weebs were summoned to a magic world.
Amazing story, Cool character and wonderful system. The setting and the plot is a good deal. Also the story started with a good thriller ?. This novel surpassed my expectations. Keep writing
Is the Autor taking us for fools ?I made the mistake to unlock all chapters in batch, and so far .. after the chapter 130, almost every chapter are in double. So i paid for more than 80 chapter where half are not even true .. How about a refund ?It's sad, because the story was good.