So far the book is amazing I’d recommend it to anyone wanting something unique Cause the FL is a whole vibe Me being used to them Fl being helpless and distressed This was an eye opener The pacing and character development is good The storyline would have you glued Currently I’m writing exams and will be back to read em allSo I’d highly recommend this to y’all readers looking for something unique and interesting The book is great
The blurb was the first thing that caught my attention as I am a fan of weak to strong tropes.
good work this story is truly wonderful to read keep it up and don't stop posting this wonderful story
well well well, it's time for review you shrimp brain. Because there are too few chapters I can't give you a full. But I smell good work from here
Not bad could use some polishing in some places(i.e storyline explanation and basic background details) ,and is an overall decent read so far.(tip: With my experiences in reading fanfics, assume the reader has little to no knowledge of the world and find ways to introduce them to the plots so that you can plan on how to properly introduce stuff.)(tip/advice: In a multiverse/Omniverse fanfic, a AU is your best friend.)
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once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until the chapter ?. this is yet another masterpiece from our dearest author. please ? more update??
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Important Note Before You Start Reading!If you've ever read those Chinese novels where the protagonist is the "chosen one" and the entire world revolves around him—where even the most brilliant villain turns into a complete idiot when they meet the MC—then you're probably familiar with the trope. Well, this novel follows that same pattern, but with a twist: the world is, for some reason, completely brain-dead.The characters have access to magic, yet they only use the most basic spells and completely ignore the practical applications of their abilities. This is where the MC comes in. He introduces modern technology (basically, cheap ChatGPT helped) to bring everyday appliances into the world. In one chapter, he invents electricity, and the next day, he’s making air conditioners. The narrative skips over crucial inventions like transistors or semiconductors, which would have been more foundational.To top it off, the MC comes from the richest family and has the unique ability to wield all the elements—something that nobody in the world can do. But despite this, it doesn’t seem to matter at all. He has a supreme skill that less than 10 people in the entire world possess, but nobody seems to care. No one treats him like a celebrity or even a target of interest. The fact that he’s essentially a walking powerhouse is completely ignored, which just feels bizarre. No Reaction from World or No Information Spread.
Please give it a go. It'll now be updated consistently. And sorry for not updating it for years. Don't worry, I didn't get COVID, I was just you know not feeling it. But now, I am. So, please support me ?.
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Awesome writing, captivating story from the very beginning!