In simple terms, this is a GREAT NOVEL, and needs more recognition.Now let's ddep dive...Pros:The world-building is pretty spot-on – not too complicated, not too simple.I love the MC's personality unpredictable yet intriguing.Side characters are well-fleshed out.I didn't spot any grammatical mistakes.The pacing is Just right!Cons:Occasionally, the descriptions of scenes are excessively lengthy.In very few cases MC's decisions/actions seem confusing and sudden(**spoiler **like how he killed Freya and the prostitute and Tiga) although that seems to be part of his personality but I hope they make sense down the line.My expectations:Mary, second most explored side character in terms of screen time, needs significant character development. The current Ren couldn't care less about the pain she caused the previous Ren. She's basically worth zilch to him as long as she's not in his way. Currently, she's just a hypocritical and narrow-minded character. But, if her character stays the same till the end, it's gonna feel like a waste of time. She'll end up as a brain-dead character not worth the time invested. Let's hope that doesn't happen! Her character arc should logically conclude, regardless of her eventual romantic choices.Whether this novel goes harem or not, it's cool either way. But every girl involved should get some solid character development, showing off what makes them unique and strong. Ren's relationships shouldn't just be for show.That's all for now...Great work author and ... DON'T DARE DROP
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I think I’m gonna like this after reading so much of those so called manipulative indifference mcs. I hope the mcs not naive or hypocritical
slower-paced exploration of the iffy situation from all angles. writing itself felt a bit stiff, but that's probably just my preferences :)
"Yeah, and as long as we're all together, we can do this." Zia's enthusiastic as well.
Overall a good novel mate? just gotta add mommy aria??
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it's good so far. keep up the good work. I'll keep supporting you.
the story is good but it seems to have been dropped.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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disappointing, mc is an alpha turned into beta, being slowly manipulated by the girl ruins it.and how the author os constantly trying to push an agenda later on is also disappointing, mc barely gets time too.really an author shouldn't heavily endorse their ideals into a story and should make it more 'neutral'. also what is the point of having this story being so heavily into the lgbt community when as far as I know the mc aint a part of it