First the story was good with Alot of world building but after reaching chapter 100 it gets old fast, the story is not moving at all despite the endless text walls, at this rate the main char is gonna stay a 7 year old for the next 1000 chapters.
There are far to many different POWs from filler characters that hold no meaning to the overall story, this is the type of story you stop reading after 500 chapters cause you got tired of reading info text walls while waiting for the story to get juicy .
I can easily draw my thought about this novel, well till now it's pretty fascinating and interesting the same. At the beginning I thought that it would be generic with the plotline but after all it ended up being an interesting story with a relatable main character at the beginning but in the process he got a great character development, from a selfish person changed to a really classmate person who cares about the others. My overall opinion is that it's really good novel I have no complaints about the story or sum, ofc some parts may they had their flaws like all the stories, keep in mind there's no a flawless story (yeah even Berserk has its flaws). I would give it objectively a 7,9/10 writing wise (Idk if I'm being strict but that's how I am) enjoyment wise would be a 9+ tho.
Mystrous and Interesting
This novel is really good and cool.
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Coming from author's other book I would like to say The story is going good but it lacks the number of chapters.
reminds me of the Plague Inc game...........................................................................................................
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Great characters, they feel almost alive as I read and imagine them all interacting with each other. It is a great standalone story, and I believe as a fan of the author's Quillverse series that it will only get better as the story progresses.
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Translation Quality: should get minus point.
The translator of this novel is totally sucks.. he just keep skipping all the good parts in a chapter. Like in chapter 189 in the morning after waking up Li Yi shoved the thing inside Little elf(Yang Rong) from behind while she was on the phone and start another big battle,, in another chapter 296 where LI Yi touching Jiaojiaos thigh under table and reached the mysterious zone, that's why she jump up and go to make dish.. There are lot like this critical information this damn translator didn't put in the novel.. This translator just keeping us readers Deprived from all those juicy funs.. This is a total sin,.. Translator should repent his wrongdoings...
There is no SPOILER in my comment cause the translator didn't even put it in the translated novel in the first palce..
[i get those missing parts in machine-translated version. But those translation sucks.]
Shameless Review but IM BACK! GONNA WRITE AS I HAVE NOW FILLED WITH IDEAS AND STUFF LIKE THAT!
I CANT WRITE AS MUCH AS I COULD BUT ILL WRITE AND WRITE