Wow, I really do like your book, it seems really intriguing, especially the chapter one, it got me clued to my screen, I really do see a future in this book
Fast paced without seeming rushed, he can love forever so he isn't in a hurry and remains low key, gets various techniques, the plot is q bit scattered until chapter 20, but I guess that's what happens when the MC can live forever and time rushes by.
well, it has been 40 chapters so far, the story as seen growth, from a save zone to a wider forest and some insight to another plane showing good development and back ground, the mc so far as not started with some stupid idea. so a win for me.
An amazing story, I like how th Mc is overpowered and how he can do things at will, he isn’ restricted by things like a system, and for the women in his harem he doesn’t keep them as useless flower vases, he helps them get stronger. Over all it’s a great novel
I have been following this novel since I first saw it in the evolution writing prompt discussion. I’ve been reading this for almost a month, so I feel its about time I give it a review. (Well, the real reason for this review is that I felt bad the novel’s rating went down a .1 star and the review didn't give any reasons or constructive criticism. As a result, I’m writing my first review)
There are some grammar and spelling mistakes/typos. However, which free, original novel doesn't have those? The writing errors do not get in the way of reading the story.
The novel is updated almost every day(I think about 6 times a week, but I'm not gonna bother checking), which is more than what I was expecting. The author has school work that she needs to prioritize and she never guaranteed daily updates(she just said she would try her best to upload a chapter if possible), so I believe this is very good.
Honestly, I was expecting the story to be a bit generic after reading the synopsis, which I wouldn't mind. I like those other books with revenge/reincarnation or cultivating female leads. However, I was pleasantly surprised to find the story was actually quite unique. I guess I should have expected that when the synopsis mentioned the MC reincarnated as a white lotus. However, I was focusing on the revenge/reincarnation part of the synopsis. The story is progress quite smoothly. There isn't really any filler chapters. I have yet to feel anything was dragged out longer than it needed to be. I don't want to spoil, so I’ll just say you can expect some sweet stuff(not romance though).
So far, I love the character designs and their interactions. Although the MC wants revenge, she is not one of the evil MCs who are ruthless to all. She feels very human. The changes to her character appear very natural to me. I’m looking forward to how her personality develops throughout the novel(please keep updating author). Also, I’m quite a fan of MCs who are good at acting.
Not too much has been revealed of the world yet. However, that is to be expected. It's still early on in the novel, so unless you want info dumps, you should patiently wait for the author to gradually develop the world(which I’m hoping she will do).
This review is keeping in mind that the novel is still just getting started. After the story has progressed some more, I may write another review if my opinions change. Please keep up the good work author.
Lacks originality but is interesting enough to just read to pass up time
hey friends, can you tell me an original novel in English which is the best whose language quality is like dual cultivation?[img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=coins]
lemme be real with ya improve ur synopsis
I can't believe how much I love this story, I mean its such a fun take on a VRMMO. The MC and 7 others become the villains of a brand new VRMMO, unbeknownst to the rest of the player base who all think they're up against advanced AI's. I'm really enjoying reading about these 8 completely stomping an entire literal player base. Another plus is the romance, the MC's backstory is that he is married to the other 7 in game, and we get to watch as their relationships bloom both in game and in real life.
I don't write reviews but I am gonna try this time. Well the MC is very hard to understand and he/she just does whatever they want and the side characters are just plain stupid they do things so that the MC can look cool like for example a restaurant customer is your reservation is not here and than the manager barges in apologizes to the MC and fires the employee it is fine if it has 1 aor 2 such scene in like 10 ch but this is like every single chapter which I don't like and than instead of overpowering their opponents the MC just drags the fight until it is tiring ( I am speaking about chapters over 100) 1 to 99 ch is pretty good i think
This is such a good and fun read. Probably one of the few novels which I don't get bored reading. The story is unique in its own way and has a lot of potential. Moreover, the writing is just amazing and so detailed. Keep it up, author.
Start from 33 chapter then you will never drop this novel.I really like character development.Writing style is good[img=recommend]. But think this novel underrated.I think it deserves way more views. updates are pretty frequent, and everything about the story is decent