"Don't listen to her! I'm here to save you! Please stay strong!" She yelled. "Why... would..." The child started to say but the silky voice interupted. "Don't listen! She's trying to stop you from doing what's right. You know I have always had your best interests at heart, I have always helped you when you were in need, I have always been there for you."
The group of everyone running disappeared. Leaving only Kakashi, who had been hit. Bad.
The cross eyed, middle aged man on the right side had an expression of rage when he noticed the arrival of Duan Ling Tian and his mother.
Finally someone who can pick this up, This story is what made me start reading Chinese novels but it was super slow on releasing chapters.5 stars for you guys picking this up.
この物語には素晴らしいプロットがあり、男性の主人公が即座に登場するのが気に入りました。月子は時々無邪気なように見えます。男性主人公はある意味現実的です。このレビューを140文字にするために何を書き続ければよいかわかりません。私は非常に簡潔です。この本は魔法の概念をよく理解しています。登場人物の描写が好きです。あと、月子の弟についてもきちんとした説明が必要です。
waste of time, even if it is free, there are better free once out there, this is just waste of time, progressions of mc is just slow and fast and the same time.
An incredible slow-pace novel about a teacher in a cultivation world. It doesn't have the kinda dumb trope about the student needing God-Level talent to get taught so it really feels like more is accomplished when these students learn, as teaching an average person cultivation feels a bit more impressive than teaching Jesus reincarnated.The characters are great. They're pretty fun and how they develop is very nice! I'm excited to see how these characters develop in the future! I also like how the novel handles the darker themes that are explored.I love how science is applied in the novel, and since Sect-Building is starting, I'm really looking forward to how that goes.But, the first half of the first volume seems to be written when the writer was going for a different direction, so keep in mind that those chapters will not be the best indicator of how the rest of the story will be. The main character was also pretty aimless at the time, but by the second volume, those problems are fixed.
Quiero de todo corazón seguir leyendo la historia y ver cómo continúa. Saber si el prota sucumbirá a los avances amorosos del antiguo lagarto o no.Quiero ver hasta donde llegará a crecer la tribu de goblin que tomo bajo su protección .La otra pregunta que me apremia en que tipo de dragón se convertirá una vez termine su camino evolutivo
Hmm, an interesting story with an interesting MC and who seems like the FL is also intriguing though weird af, alas the story isn't advanced enough to know more yet. I will say though that there are some grammatical errors that are quite a pain sometimes, though not something that detracts from the story. I've no problem with the update stability, but the pacing seems off, like sometimes it's very fast other times it's excruciatingly slow. Also, fair warning for new readers, I believe that the author doesn't explain much of the world, background and other details that may seem important, it is frustrating af, but he seems to go by the "Give small snippets of information in time" approach, rather than explaining things sooner. As I said this is frustrating though bearable, for me at least, idk about others. Anyway, this is a story with great potential which honestly deserves a chance, though it seems to be obscured by others, I found it by accident myself.
Trash..................................
This author is named TapWater (named after through some unfortunate events that will be given through the right time and place in the future) so are some of my introductions. I am still a student, but through some weird kinks and undoubtable stupidity happened to write a novel seemingly out of bounds.Now first of all, english is my second language and currently appears to be having issues to grammar (so bear with me). This is my first time writing a novel as was inspired by many many other creations thus leading me to this predicament. Third releases and word count can be inconsistent or until I have managed to pass my exams in the near future and if so manage to have a schedule of releases that will post to a discord channel that I suppose create in the near future until I won't appear inconsistent. Fourth this is "first time" (in a public setting) writing so expect plot holes and stuff the novel will be generalized to that of Reincarnation, Sci-fi, Magic and Stuff, System and etc. and Fifth yes the MC will appear to be OP as he is my generalization of many private works that I have done so expect that one.Currently as of now, I will be inputting many if what happened to my social life and my interactions through various games currently for example the name of the MC and his current Title is synonymous to my IGN of -RenegadeAegis- but for easy shotcalling in game chat turned it to just Rene and so expect other references from other games and novels (just a wee bit) to expand the plethora of concepts currently in the novel.So expect that my novel to be both cringy and pls bear with it.**: I am very punny and my constitution and mentality is similar to that of a Bear. Have fun and Enjoy!
The synopsis illustrates very that the story has a good storyline. Although I haven't read the entire book, I bet the plot of the book is fascinating.